Several times in the article, you say that Carol and Edna struck New England as major hurricanes; although both storms were major hurricanes, they did not make landfall at that intensity.
"During the season, there were eight named storms,[4] as well as an unnamed hurricane and a tropical depression." - What about the unnamed tropical storm?
"On Long Island, the storm surge flooded the Montauk Highway with 4 ft (1.2 m) about a mile across." - You should change that to "4 ft (1.2 m) of water"
"In response, U.S. Air Force planes flew food, medicine, rafts, and water purification tablets to the most affected regions" - That sentence is missing the period.
There is a minor incidence of first and last name inconsistency on the references, #29, #41, and #42 have the last name first, while the others are vice-versa.
Several times in the article, you say that Carol and Edna struck New England as major hurricanes; although both storms were major hurricanes, they did not make landfall at that intensity.
"During the season, there were eight named storms,[4] as well as an unnamed hurricane and a tropical depression." - What about the unnamed tropical storm?
"On Long Island, the storm surge flooded the Montauk Highway with 4 ft (1.2 m) about a mile across." - You should change that to "4 ft (1.2 m) of water"
"In response, U.S. Air Force planes flew food, medicine, rafts, and water purification tablets to the most affected regions" - That sentence is missing the period.
There is a minor incidence of first and last name inconsistency on the references, #29, #41, and #42 have the last name first, while the others are vice-versa.