I'm not sure that "storm harbors" are a thing separate from regular harbors.
just shy of its originally-assessed hurricane intensity. - this needs a footnote or an inline explanation of the HURDAT reanalysis or something for the casual reader's understanding.
north of the coastline of Cuba
Suggest "harbored" → "possessed".
communications between the city and nearby Tampa were slowed. Unclear how flooding can slow communications but not sever them.
On heels of Tropical Storm Six - missing word.
crossed western coastline of Cuba - again.
Why are some place names linked but others not (like Punta de Cartas, Leeward Islands, Turks and Caicos)
Worth noting Long Island is in the Bahamas and not the T&C.
Approximately 1,632 - too specific to be approximate.
Naval Air Station Richmond suffered catastrophic losses, where high winds - dangling modifier.
The Cape Fear River crested at its highest point on record - does this record still stand? Also, "level" more accurate than "point".
The final Atlantic hurricane of 1945 was not known to have existed until over a decade following the end of the season. - In the broadest way of thinking, the storm's 200+ causalities contradict the fact that nobody knew the hurricane happened. People knew about the storm; it just wasn't listed in the database.
Due to the hurricane's small size - I don't believe the size was mentioned prior to this. Got any RMW estimates or similar?
Otherwise, the writing is mostly strong and I see no major omissions in the content for the purposes of a seasonal summary. On-hold for now. – Juliancolton |
Talk17:44, 7 May 2017 (UTC)reply
I'm not sure that "storm harbors" are a thing separate from regular harbors.
just shy of its originally-assessed hurricane intensity. - this needs a footnote or an inline explanation of the HURDAT reanalysis or something for the casual reader's understanding.
north of the coastline of Cuba
Suggest "harbored" → "possessed".
communications between the city and nearby Tampa were slowed. Unclear how flooding can slow communications but not sever them.
On heels of Tropical Storm Six - missing word.
crossed western coastline of Cuba - again.
Why are some place names linked but others not (like Punta de Cartas, Leeward Islands, Turks and Caicos)
Worth noting Long Island is in the Bahamas and not the T&C.
Approximately 1,632 - too specific to be approximate.
Naval Air Station Richmond suffered catastrophic losses, where high winds - dangling modifier.
The Cape Fear River crested at its highest point on record - does this record still stand? Also, "level" more accurate than "point".
The final Atlantic hurricane of 1945 was not known to have existed until over a decade following the end of the season. - In the broadest way of thinking, the storm's 200+ causalities contradict the fact that nobody knew the hurricane happened. People knew about the storm; it just wasn't listed in the database.
Due to the hurricane's small size - I don't believe the size was mentioned prior to this. Got any RMW estimates or similar?
Otherwise, the writing is mostly strong and I see no major omissions in the content for the purposes of a seasonal summary. On-hold for now. – Juliancolton |
Talk17:44, 7 May 2017 (UTC)reply