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Internal pages: Something like:
[2][3]). Such pages are not fluff, but can be good places to find recruits for the project, possibly including subject-matter experts, especially if cross-referenced to the project. Also,
Wikipedia:WikiProject Deletion sorting/Cue sports (cf.
[4][5][6]).
Create timelines, both textual and graphical. See link for various guidelines and examples. We need an overall one for cue sports generally, and more specific ones as we drill down into more specific topics (timeline of
nine-ball, timeline of
Willie Mosconi's career, etc.).
Form sections:
Exhibition game needs section on cue sports; could later form a new article with "Main article..." xref to it. What other general articles need cue sports sections?
Images: improve articles with images from commons; create pics and add them to commons as GFDL/CC-by/PD.
Add: {{Sport overview}} to main articles of cue games that are real sports; medal table tags where they apply (see
Ding Junhui for example).
Insert: Cue sports events (tournament results, etc.) into the "year in sports" categories (e.g.
1965 in sports), using {{subst:
Cue sports heading}} if that year doesn't have one yet.
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"the BACC decided to abandon the challenge system that had been used for both the Billiards Championship and for the Professional Snooker Championship." - employed for both the
Billiards Championship and the Professional Snooker Championship.
Wikilink the term frame to the relevant article only on the first mention
"For matches before the final," - how about For pre-final matches, instead?
"over six days than the three envisaged when the tournament's conditions were announced." - why was this the case?
Amended. The source has a note "(evening sessions only being played, so that the game occupied six days instead of three)" but no reason as to why the change was made.
BennyOnTheLoose (
talk) 16:47, 14 June 2021 (UTC)reply
Wikilink the term session to the relevant article only on the first mention
"Mann when attempting to pot the yellow instead of playing for a snoooker in the deciding frame lost him the match." - the word in bold contains a spelling error
"The final was played from 4 March to 7 March and was over 33 frames." - The 33-frame final was played from 4 to 7 March.
The term frame can be wikilinked to the relevant article only on the first mention
Wikilink foul stroke to the relevant article for non-Snooker readers
"Dennis won the 15th frame by six points, after clearing the last three colours, and added the 16th frame, during which he escaped from a snooker with a massé shot, and potted the pink after Davis had gone in-off." - run-on sentence
"Davis lost the first frame by one point, 56-57," - hyphen should be replaced by an en dash per
MOS:DASH
"and the over break of over 50 made during the tournament." - repetition of "over"
Am placing the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above
MWright96(talk) 14:44, 14 June 2021 (UTC)reply
Many thanks for your constructive review comments,
MWright96. Let me know if anything else is needed. Regards,
BennyOnTheLoose (
talk) 17:11, 14 June 2021 (UTC)reply
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Snooker, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
snooker on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.SnookerWikipedia:WikiProject SnookerTemplate:WikiProject SnookerSnooker articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Cue sports, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
pool,
carom billiards and other
cue sports on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Cue sportsWikipedia:WikiProject Cue sportsTemplate:WikiProject Cue sportscue sports articles
Internal pages: Something like:
[2][3]). Such pages are not fluff, but can be good places to find recruits for the project, possibly including subject-matter experts, especially if cross-referenced to the project. Also,
Wikipedia:WikiProject Deletion sorting/Cue sports (cf.
[4][5][6]).
Create timelines, both textual and graphical. See link for various guidelines and examples. We need an overall one for cue sports generally, and more specific ones as we drill down into more specific topics (timeline of
nine-ball, timeline of
Willie Mosconi's career, etc.).
Form sections:
Exhibition game needs section on cue sports; could later form a new article with "Main article..." xref to it. What other general articles need cue sports sections?
Images: improve articles with images from commons; create pics and add them to commons as GFDL/CC-by/PD.
Add: {{Sport overview}} to main articles of cue games that are real sports; medal table tags where they apply (see
Ding Junhui for example).
Insert: Cue sports events (tournament results, etc.) into the "year in sports" categories (e.g.
1965 in sports), using {{subst:
Cue sports heading}} if that year doesn't have one yet.
This article is within the scope of WikiProject England, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
England on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.EnglandWikipedia:WikiProject EnglandTemplate:WikiProject EnglandEngland-related articles
"the BACC decided to abandon the challenge system that had been used for both the Billiards Championship and for the Professional Snooker Championship." - employed for both the
Billiards Championship and the Professional Snooker Championship.
Wikilink the term frame to the relevant article only on the first mention
"For matches before the final," - how about For pre-final matches, instead?
"over six days than the three envisaged when the tournament's conditions were announced." - why was this the case?
Amended. The source has a note "(evening sessions only being played, so that the game occupied six days instead of three)" but no reason as to why the change was made.
BennyOnTheLoose (
talk) 16:47, 14 June 2021 (UTC)reply
Wikilink the term session to the relevant article only on the first mention
"Mann when attempting to pot the yellow instead of playing for a snoooker in the deciding frame lost him the match." - the word in bold contains a spelling error
"The final was played from 4 March to 7 March and was over 33 frames." - The 33-frame final was played from 4 to 7 March.
The term frame can be wikilinked to the relevant article only on the first mention
Wikilink foul stroke to the relevant article for non-Snooker readers
"Dennis won the 15th frame by six points, after clearing the last three colours, and added the 16th frame, during which he escaped from a snooker with a massé shot, and potted the pink after Davis had gone in-off." - run-on sentence
"Davis lost the first frame by one point, 56-57," - hyphen should be replaced by an en dash per
MOS:DASH
"and the over break of over 50 made during the tournament." - repetition of "over"
Am placing the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above
MWright96(talk) 14:44, 14 June 2021 (UTC)reply
Many thanks for your constructive review comments,
MWright96. Let me know if anything else is needed. Regards,
BennyOnTheLoose (
talk) 17:11, 14 June 2021 (UTC)reply