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Reviewer: REDMAN 2019 ( talk · contribs) 10:48, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

I'll take a look at this shortly. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 10:48, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Lead

• Link England

  Linking countries is normally discouraged, per WP:OVERLINK. Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Background

• England link needed here as well

  Same as above. Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

• "Joe Cassidy from Bolton Wanderers, George McLachlan from Clyde and Hughie Ferguson from Motherwell." Reference

  The ref covering this is number 7, the one immediately following on. It covers both sentences. Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

First Division

August-December

• Ferguson is already linked in the previous section, no need to link him again

  Dropped. Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

• Link Bury in the third paragraph

  Linked. Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

January-May

• "Ferguson rediscovered his goalscoring form after being switched and added a brace in a 2–0 win over Derby the following week in front of 10,057 spectators, the lowest league crowd of the season at Ninian Park." This sentence needs a ref

  As above, the ref immediately preceding the information covers this section (ref 14 in this case).

• Unlink Bury. They should be linked in the section above, not here.

  Done. Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

• Link Liverpool

  Done. Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Match results

• Who scored the own-goals against Tottenham?

  The ref I have only lists the scorer as an own goal, not the actual player unfortunately. Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

FA Cup

• Link Bolton to Bolton Wanderers

  Bolton are linked in the background section previously. Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

• "as Cardiff were aggrieved early on after being denied a penalty." Link Penalty to Penalty kick (association football)

  Done. Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

• "Lewis later blamed the error on his jersey, claiming that due to it being new, the material was greasy and made it difficult to grip the ball." Ref needed

  As above, the ref immediately preceding the information covers this section (refs 49 and 50 in this case). Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Aftermath

• "Cardiff showed a major improvement in their league form the following year, finishing sixth in the First Division." Ref needed

  As above, the ref immediately preceding the information covers this section (ref 60 in this case). Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Comments

There are a few issues that need addressing so I'm putting this on hold for now. REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 11:31, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

@ REDMAN 2019: Thanks for taking a look, I've addressed all of the points above. Kosack ( talk) 12:58, 27 October 2020 (UTC) reply

@ Kosack: Thanks for the feedback, I would say this article now meets GA criteria so I'm passing it. Congrats! REDMAN 2019 ( talk) 10:51, 28 October 2020 (UTC) reply