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"manufacturing plant. Thus the police banned large marches and parades." → "manufacturing plant and a subsequent city ban on large marches and parades."
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Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
Infobox and lede
"manufacturing plant. Thus the police banned large marches and parades." → "manufacturing plant and a subsequent city ban on large marches and parades."
GhostRiver, just pinging to let you know that I made some edits to the article that address your comments. Thank you for starting this review, and if there are any further questions, comments, or concerns about the article, please reach out. -
JJonahJackalope (
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20:09, 21 October 2021 (UTC)reply