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This review is transcluded from Talk:1900 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Yellow Evan ( talk · contribs) 17:43, 23 July 2013 (UTC) reply

  • " Also during the season was the Galveston hurricane, which is currently the deadliest natural disaster in the history of the United States." don't mention it here since you mention it later in the lead. Y E Pacific Hurricane 17:43, 23 July 2013 (UTC) reply
  • " There were at least 107 deaths in Canada, most of them caused by sunken vessels near Newfoundland and the France territory of Saint-Pierre.[8]" to " There were at least 107 deaths in Canada, mostly due to sunken vessels near Newfoundland and the France territory of Saint-Pierre.[8]" Y E Pacific Hurricane 17:43, 23 July 2013 (UTC) reply
  • Ref 7 delink to Environmental Canada since you link it already in the refs. Y E Pacific Hurricane
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:1900 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Yellow Evan ( talk · contribs) 17:43, 23 July 2013 (UTC) reply

  • " Also during the season was the Galveston hurricane, which is currently the deadliest natural disaster in the history of the United States." don't mention it here since you mention it later in the lead. Y E Pacific Hurricane 17:43, 23 July 2013 (UTC) reply
  • " There were at least 107 deaths in Canada, most of them caused by sunken vessels near Newfoundland and the France territory of Saint-Pierre.[8]" to " There were at least 107 deaths in Canada, mostly due to sunken vessels near Newfoundland and the France territory of Saint-Pierre.[8]" Y E Pacific Hurricane 17:43, 23 July 2013 (UTC) reply
  • Ref 7 delink to Environmental Canada since you link it already in the refs. Y E Pacific Hurricane

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