"The 1899 Carrabelle hurricane caused significant damage in Dominican Republic and the Florida Panhandle. The second tropical cyclone and second hurricane of the annual season, " what kind of season? Spring? Also, missing a "the" after the first "in".
YEPacificHurricane03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
" "Great" damage was reported along coastal sections of the country, while a loss of telegraph service impacted most of interior areas." no need for comma in such sentence.
YEPacificHurricane03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
Hint: it has nothing to do with the Heat vs. Spurs game. :P 5 score and 14 years ago, a hurricane struck northwestern Florida. :P Actually, another source I have says that only 9 houses remained.--
12george1 (
talk)
03:57, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"Many boats at the harbor and the wharfs in Lanark were wrecked. Large portions of stores and pavilions in the city were damaged. " have you ever heard of a semicolon? If so, combine these sentences with such feature.
YEPacificHurricane03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
" Early on August 2, it weakened to a tropical storm and then a tropical depression several hours later, shortly before dissipating over southern Alabama.[2]" separate these two sentences.
YEPacificHurricane03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"The city of Carrabelle was devastated, with only nine houses remaining." to "The city of Carrabelle was devastated as only nine houses in the city remained."
YEPacificHurricane
" According to the mayor, about 200 families were left homeless." Does the mayor have a name? Or did he go around with no name and wrote no name on his SAT papers?
YEPacificHurricane03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"One fatality occurred in Carrabelle when a house collapsed on a woman, Mary Williams; numerous other people in the area sustained injuries.[4] " we don't usually mention names of people affected by hurricanes unless notable (like Tim Duncan) :P
YEPacificHurricane03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"The 1899 Carrabelle hurricane caused significant damage in Dominican Republic and the Florida Panhandle. The second tropical cyclone and second hurricane of the annual season, " what kind of season? Spring? Also, missing a "the" after the first "in".
YEPacificHurricane03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
" "Great" damage was reported along coastal sections of the country, while a loss of telegraph service impacted most of interior areas." no need for comma in such sentence.
YEPacificHurricane03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
Hint: it has nothing to do with the Heat vs. Spurs game. :P 5 score and 14 years ago, a hurricane struck northwestern Florida. :P Actually, another source I have says that only 9 houses remained.--
12george1 (
talk)
03:57, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"Many boats at the harbor and the wharfs in Lanark were wrecked. Large portions of stores and pavilions in the city were damaged. " have you ever heard of a semicolon? If so, combine these sentences with such feature.
YEPacificHurricane03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
" Early on August 2, it weakened to a tropical storm and then a tropical depression several hours later, shortly before dissipating over southern Alabama.[2]" separate these two sentences.
YEPacificHurricane03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"The city of Carrabelle was devastated, with only nine houses remaining." to "The city of Carrabelle was devastated as only nine houses in the city remained."
YEPacificHurricane
" According to the mayor, about 200 families were left homeless." Does the mayor have a name? Or did he go around with no name and wrote no name on his SAT papers?
YEPacificHurricane03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"One fatality occurred in Carrabelle when a house collapsed on a woman, Mary Williams; numerous other people in the area sustained injuries.[4] " we don't usually mention names of people affected by hurricanes unless notable (like Tim Duncan) :P
YEPacificHurricane03:33, 17 June 2013 (UTC)reply