Background:"and Chris Charsley played no more League football" - would it be right to say that he retired from League football, rather than "played no more"?
It would be right to say he retired, and I've changed it to say "retired from League football to concentrate on his police career". The "played no more" wording stems from the fact that Mr Charsley "retired" from football several times, but on each previous occasion was persuaded to return.
Review: You need to run through the paragraphs and ensure that the quotes have the required direct citations wherever possible.
Done, I think.
Images: The names don't need to be wikilinked if they've been included elsewhere in nearby article text.
Didn't realise that: delinked.
Match details: Outside of the GA requirements, it would be great to see those other tables sortable as well. However, as unsorted there's a problem with overlinking as each team will only need to be linked in their first appearance in each section - but if it's sortable then that can be ignored.
Made Football League First Division results table sortable, but left the others alone. Items in the small tables were only linked once per table anyway.
Background:"and Chris Charsley played no more League football" - would it be right to say that he retired from League football, rather than "played no more"?
It would be right to say he retired, and I've changed it to say "retired from League football to concentrate on his police career". The "played no more" wording stems from the fact that Mr Charsley "retired" from football several times, but on each previous occasion was persuaded to return.
Review: You need to run through the paragraphs and ensure that the quotes have the required direct citations wherever possible.
Done, I think.
Images: The names don't need to be wikilinked if they've been included elsewhere in nearby article text.
Didn't realise that: delinked.
Match details: Outside of the GA requirements, it would be great to see those other tables sortable as well. However, as unsorted there's a problem with overlinking as each team will only need to be linked in their first appearance in each section - but if it's sortable then that can be ignored.
Made Football League First Division results table sortable, but left the others alone. Items in the small tables were only linked once per table anyway.