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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 05:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
This is a quickfail. The article is not sufficiently broad in coverage and would not meet our standards for breadth and depth (GA criterion #3). It also has copyright violation issues that are serious and require action.
While it will fail, I'd like to provide some advice for article improvement. Some urgent action is needed due to copyvio concerns. Keep in mind I'm not from India, so some things about Indian English stick out as odd to me.
The series is inspired by Upendra Namburi's 2017 book. These must be reworded to not be copyright violations.
You may find the copyvio detector useful in comparing the article text to source material and identifying passages that need attention.
The series' release was originally scheduled on January 2021, but due to lockdown and other health hazards, rescheduled to 8 April 2021.to
The series's release was originally scheduled for January 2021, but COVID-19 restrictions prompted it to be delayed to 8 April 2021.
"11th Hour is a thickly populated series for its kind"is even trying to say.
Anoopspeaks, this nomination cannot proceed. Please remove or reword any material that currently is too close to its source material or comes from aha directly and also take into account my other suggestions to improve the page. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
I had made changes as far as i can. Can you please look in to it. Also i am not very good in english. "The series's release was originally scheduled for January 2021" this sentence gives passive voice misuse. If i remove 'was', it will become correct but is that a good idea. Can you reword it properly
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 05:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
This is a quickfail. The article is not sufficiently broad in coverage and would not meet our standards for breadth and depth (GA criterion #3). It also has copyright violation issues that are serious and require action.
While it will fail, I'd like to provide some advice for article improvement. Some urgent action is needed due to copyvio concerns. Keep in mind I'm not from India, so some things about Indian English stick out as odd to me.
The series is inspired by Upendra Namburi's 2017 book. These must be reworded to not be copyright violations.
You may find the copyvio detector useful in comparing the article text to source material and identifying passages that need attention.
The series' release was originally scheduled on January 2021, but due to lockdown and other health hazards, rescheduled to 8 April 2021.to
The series's release was originally scheduled for January 2021, but COVID-19 restrictions prompted it to be delayed to 8 April 2021.
"11th Hour is a thickly populated series for its kind"is even trying to say.
Anoopspeaks, this nomination cannot proceed. Please remove or reword any material that currently is too close to its source material or comes from aha directly and also take into account my other suggestions to improve the page. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)
I had made changes as far as i can. Can you please look in to it. Also i am not very good in english. "The series's release was originally scheduled for January 2021" this sentence gives passive voice misuse. If i remove 'was', it will become correct but is that a good idea. Can you reword it properly
Anoop Rajasekharan (
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16:44, 22 May 2021 (UTC)