First opinions, Most of the info seems to have come from Self-published sources,like Fort Drum Public Affairs Office . Self-published sources are largely not acceptable.
The Article seems well referenced and well written
IS the redlinked Panama Canal Division the same as
Panama Canal Division (United States)? Please check all redlinks for spelling and articles in different spellings
Request authors to do another redlink check for the remaining redlinks.Do not remove any, just check once.--
Vinay84 (
talk) 06:44, 16 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Done. As far as I can tell, all of those subjects don't yet have an article on Wikipedia. —
Ed!(talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Lot of single sentence paragraphs especially in the initial sections.See if they can be merged or expanded.--
Vinay84 (
talk) 06:58, 16 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Merged most of these sentences. —
Ed!(talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)reply
File:U.S. Army soldier securing site - Parun, Nuristan - 06-27-2007.jpg in Initial deployments section has a delete alert.
Replaced image with another copy without the notice. —
Ed!(talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Some statements need citation and have been marked in the article.
--
Vinay84 (
talk) 06:30, 17 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Which ones? I can't find any "citation needed" templates. —
Ed!(talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)reply
It is a subordinate unit of the XVIII Airborne Corps and the only division-sized element of the US Army to specialize in fighting under harsh terrain and weather conditions. Move the statement into the article proper and give a reference.
Done. That statement is reiterated in the "Organization" section, with a ref. —
Ed!(talk) 16:55, 18 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Good job till now. --
Vinay84 (
talk) 07:09, 18 September 2009 (UTC)reply
There are dead links :E.g. Lineage and Honors of the 10th Mountain Division and 4th Brigade Combat Team Website . Check the links and references and if possible update them.
Since you already have Fort Drum website among the references, there eis no need for it again in Eternal Links
First opinions, Most of the info seems to have come from Self-published sources,like Fort Drum Public Affairs Office . Self-published sources are largely not acceptable.
The Article seems well referenced and well written
IS the redlinked Panama Canal Division the same as
Panama Canal Division (United States)? Please check all redlinks for spelling and articles in different spellings
Request authors to do another redlink check for the remaining redlinks.Do not remove any, just check once.--
Vinay84 (
talk) 06:44, 16 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Done. As far as I can tell, all of those subjects don't yet have an article on Wikipedia. —
Ed!(talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Lot of single sentence paragraphs especially in the initial sections.See if they can be merged or expanded.--
Vinay84 (
talk) 06:58, 16 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Merged most of these sentences. —
Ed!(talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)reply
File:U.S. Army soldier securing site - Parun, Nuristan - 06-27-2007.jpg in Initial deployments section has a delete alert.
Replaced image with another copy without the notice. —
Ed!(talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Some statements need citation and have been marked in the article.
--
Vinay84 (
talk) 06:30, 17 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Which ones? I can't find any "citation needed" templates. —
Ed!(talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)reply
It is a subordinate unit of the XVIII Airborne Corps and the only division-sized element of the US Army to specialize in fighting under harsh terrain and weather conditions. Move the statement into the article proper and give a reference.
Done. That statement is reiterated in the "Organization" section, with a ref. —
Ed!(talk) 16:55, 18 September 2009 (UTC)reply
Good job till now. --
Vinay84 (
talk) 07:09, 18 September 2009 (UTC)reply
There are dead links :E.g. Lineage and Honors of the 10th Mountain Division and 4th Brigade Combat Team Website . Check the links and references and if possible update them.
Since you already have Fort Drum website among the references, there eis no need for it again in Eternal Links