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Reviewer: Swpb ( talk · contribs) 18:00, 16 March 2017 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | ||
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | Layout needs some improvement – the "History" section should be broken into subsections. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. | ||
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | ||
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | ||
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | ||
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | The sources are largely favorable to the topic – that may be unavoidable, but care must be taken not to let that bias show through. In a few places, statements from sources are being taken at face value:
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | ||
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | ||
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | ||
7. Overall assessment. | Nominator refuses to fix issues which reviewer considers unresolved. Nominator is free to try again with someone else. |
— swpb T 18:53, 16 March 2017 (UTC)
"African politics did not impede the selection process". That may be true, but it's coming from a biased source. I suggest you find some way of acknowledging that the opinion may be biased that makes it clear to the reader, or find an alternative neutral source providing the same opinion. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 17:48, 2 April 2017 (UTC)
"organizers ask themselves 'what is necessary, what can be achieved, how [to] do something different'". This is a statement from the fair's founder., and as such can be taken as a fair comment on the organizers' motivation. I do not consider it necessary to change this providing the fair's founder is one of the organizers. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 17:52, 2 April 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Swpb ( talk · contribs) 18:00, 16 March 2017 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | ||
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | Layout needs some improvement – the "History" section should be broken into subsections. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. | ||
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | ||
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | ||
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | ||
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | The sources are largely favorable to the topic – that may be unavoidable, but care must be taken not to let that bias show through. In a few places, statements from sources are being taken at face value:
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | ||
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | ||
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | ||
7. Overall assessment. | Nominator refuses to fix issues which reviewer considers unresolved. Nominator is free to try again with someone else. |
— swpb T 18:53, 16 March 2017 (UTC)
"African politics did not impede the selection process". That may be true, but it's coming from a biased source. I suggest you find some way of acknowledging that the opinion may be biased that makes it clear to the reader, or find an alternative neutral source providing the same opinion. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 17:48, 2 April 2017 (UTC)
"organizers ask themselves 'what is necessary, what can be achieved, how [to] do something different'". This is a statement from the fair's founder., and as such can be taken as a fair comment on the organizers' motivation. I do not consider it necessary to change this providing the fair's founder is one of the organizers. • • • Peter (Southwood) (talk): 17:52, 2 April 2017 (UTC)