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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld ( talk · contribs) 12:51, 20 August 2013 (UTC)
It's essential for an item of clothing that you give a description of the item, what materials are used, size, colour, how is it made, who makes it etc.
Fixed.
Done.
I've ammended this to the cap was "the typical cap of peasants."
Yes, all the gravestones had sculptural depictions of the hat. This instance is notable because it shows to what extent the cap was considered a nationalist symbol. If the wording is unclear, can you please suggest how it should be reworded for clarity?
I'm currently working on finding some better pics. Regards,
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17:45, 20 August 2013 (UTC)
I've added two new photos, both of which are clearer than the old ones.
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21:35, 20 August 2013 (UTC)
That's better. Can you find some information about the hat itself?♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:00, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
I've come up with a "Design" section and sourced it. What do you think? 23 editor ( talk) 14:22, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
Better, thanks, although the ones in most of the pictures look olive green/ khaki, typical military uniform in colour to me rather than grey. Could you find out what material they're made from and who makes them?♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:09, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
The lead also needs a summary of it.♦ Dr. Blofeld 18:54, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
How's this? 23 editor ( talk) 19:03, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
Looks fine.
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Looking in google books and finding very little of substance, I think you've done a very good job in writing a credible article on this and demonstrates the strength of wikipedia on notable but unconventional encyclopedia topics.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:01, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
Thank you very much for reviewing the article. Cheers, 23 editor ( talk) 20:25, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
I listed it under warfare in a new section for military uniforms and clothing OK?♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:04, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
Sure. 23 editor ( talk) 22:24, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld ( talk · contribs) 12:51, 20 August 2013 (UTC)
It's essential for an item of clothing that you give a description of the item, what materials are used, size, colour, how is it made, who makes it etc.
Fixed.
Done.
I've ammended this to the cap was "the typical cap of peasants."
Yes, all the gravestones had sculptural depictions of the hat. This instance is notable because it shows to what extent the cap was considered a nationalist symbol. If the wording is unclear, can you please suggest how it should be reworded for clarity?
I'm currently working on finding some better pics. Regards,
23 editor (
talk)
17:45, 20 August 2013 (UTC)
I've added two new photos, both of which are clearer than the old ones.
23 editor (
talk)
21:35, 20 August 2013 (UTC)
That's better. Can you find some information about the hat itself?♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:00, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
I've come up with a "Design" section and sourced it. What do you think? 23 editor ( talk) 14:22, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
Better, thanks, although the ones in most of the pictures look olive green/ khaki, typical military uniform in colour to me rather than grey. Could you find out what material they're made from and who makes them?♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:09, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
The lead also needs a summary of it.♦ Dr. Blofeld 18:54, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
How's this? 23 editor ( talk) 19:03, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
Looks fine.
GA review – see
WP:WIAGA for criteria
Looking in google books and finding very little of substance, I think you've done a very good job in writing a credible article on this and demonstrates the strength of wikipedia on notable but unconventional encyclopedia topics.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:01, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
Thank you very much for reviewing the article. Cheers, 23 editor ( talk) 20:25, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
I listed it under warfare in a new section for military uniforms and clothing OK?♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:04, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
Sure. 23 editor ( talk) 22:24, 21 August 2013 (UTC)