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You've had a long wait with this one Deacon; I'll post up my detailed comments over the next day or so. -- Malleus Fatuorum 01:29, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
First few issues:
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Reworded on all points. Is the rewording satisfactory? Deacon of Pndapetzim ( Talk) 17:49, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
Ælfhelm (died 1006) was Ealdorman of York, the governor of southern Northumbria for the English king, between about 994 and his death in 1006. His powerful and wealthy family came from Mercia, a territory and former kingdom incorporating most of central England. Despite being an outsider, Ælfhelm became the ealdorman of Northumbria ...".
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You've had a long wait with this one Deacon; I'll post up my detailed comments over the next day or so. -- Malleus Fatuorum 01:29, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
First few issues:
-- Malleus Fatuorum 02:35, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
Reworded on all points. Is the rewording satisfactory? Deacon of Pndapetzim ( Talk) 17:49, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
Ælfhelm (died 1006) was Ealdorman of York, the governor of southern Northumbria for the English king, between about 994 and his death in 1006. His powerful and wealthy family came from Mercia, a territory and former kingdom incorporating most of central England. Despite being an outsider, Ælfhelm became the ealdorman of Northumbria ...".