"(You Drive Me) Crazy" attained worldwide success, peaking inside the top ten in seventeen countries. → "(You Drive Me) Crazy" was a commercial success, and peaked inside the top ten on the singles charts of seventeen countries.
"(You Drive Me) Crazy" was written Jörgen Elofsson, while song production and additional songwriting was done by Martin, Per Magnusson and David Kreuger. Spears recorded the vocals for the song in March 1998, at Cheiron Studios in Stockholm, Sweden. It was also mixed at Cheiron Studios by Martin. Esbjörn Öhrwall and Johan Carlberg played the guitar, while bass guitar was done by Thomas Lindberg. Keyboards and programming was done by Kreuger, and additional keyboards by Magnusson. → Source(s)?
I'm confused as to why this section is so short? By the looks of the chart table below, the song charted in a lot of territories. This section could definitely be expanded into a standalone section, not a sub section. Summarize them in these paragraphs: Oceanic (Australia and NZ), European and American. Then I will go through the section.
Jive Records commissioned a music video for the song to be directed by
Nigel Dick. → The song's accompanying
music video was directed by
Nigel Dick. Also, source?
The concept was created by Spears herself → Spears conceptualized the video's treatment, and explained during an interview with MTV in 1999 that "it would be....
...on the film's soundtrack. At first, Grenier didn't wanted to participate. → ...on the film's soundtrack, however, Grenier did not want to participate.
Dick also revealed that he was impressed by the singer's work ethic, saying, "Britney came to the set completely rehearsed. Certainly whenever I worked with her, she had an extraordinary work ethic, which I was always impressed by." → You say what the quotes says, try and paraphrase the quote into prose instead.
The music video premiered on MTV's Making the Video special that aired on July 18, 1999,[27] while debuting on TRL at number four, on August 24, 1999.[28] It is the longest running by a female artist on TRL, staying on the top ten for seventy-three days.[18] → Hmm, this bothers me. The second paragraph needs reworking. Add the premiere date to the first paragraph, expand the second with a much better synopsis, then add the TRL and info after the synopsis, then reviews.
Spears performed "(You Drive Me) Crazy" on several occasions, including → As part of promotion for "(You Drive Me) Crazy"'s release as a single, Spears performed it at the
1999 MTV Europe Music Awards[31] and
1999 Billboard Music Awards.[32]
On 2003, the song was covered by
Richard Cheese. The cover was included on his album, Tuxicity. → In 2003, American musician
Richard Cheese covered "(You Drive Me) Crazy" and included it on his album Tuxicity.
performed a tribute → I don't know why but I always associate the word "tribute", with regard to music, as being something for someone who is either old or dead. Lol. Maybe find another word?
Why do you use [...] instead of (...) for the names of remixes etc.?
Becase when it's a remix, the common is to use [...]. When it's part of the song's name, we use (...). Since the song is (You Drive Me) Crazy, it would make much sense to use (YDM) C (...). That's what I think, but if it needs to be changed, then I'll do it. -
SauloTalk to Me17:52, 1 April 2012 (UTC)reply
No it's okay.
Credits and personnel
Resolved comments
Include the recording location(s)?
Charts and certifications - Weekly Charts
Resolved comments
Years for peak positions are mean't to be in separate tables. So you should have one for 1999 peaks, 2000 peaks and 2012 peak. You could use
this as an example.
Refs 1 and 2 are both Rolling Stone, but are formatted differently? 1's Rolling Stone isn't linked, but the second is. Should be the other way around. Wenner Media should be the publisher for both. Check other Rolling Stone references too.
Ref 38 work is MTV Networks and the publisher is Viacom.
Ref 39 same as ref 38 and need to be unlinked
Ref 40 same as ref 38 and 39 and need to be unlinked.
Ref 41 they don't need to be linked again
Ref 43 they don't need to be linked again
Ref 45 title shouldn't be in capitals
Ref 46 they don't need to be linked again
Ref 48 they don't need to be linked again. You need to make sure that you are consistent with work and publisher parameters and that they are only linked the first time.
Ref 50, 51, 52, 53 Jive don't need to be linked again.
To be honest, I can't actually see where you have made corrections to these?? I picked a few at random and they hadn't been fixed. You need to go through several times.
Aaron •
You Da One
"(You Drive Me) Crazy" attained worldwide success, peaking inside the top ten in seventeen countries. → "(You Drive Me) Crazy" was a commercial success, and peaked inside the top ten on the singles charts of seventeen countries.
"(You Drive Me) Crazy" was written Jörgen Elofsson, while song production and additional songwriting was done by Martin, Per Magnusson and David Kreuger. Spears recorded the vocals for the song in March 1998, at Cheiron Studios in Stockholm, Sweden. It was also mixed at Cheiron Studios by Martin. Esbjörn Öhrwall and Johan Carlberg played the guitar, while bass guitar was done by Thomas Lindberg. Keyboards and programming was done by Kreuger, and additional keyboards by Magnusson. → Source(s)?
I'm confused as to why this section is so short? By the looks of the chart table below, the song charted in a lot of territories. This section could definitely be expanded into a standalone section, not a sub section. Summarize them in these paragraphs: Oceanic (Australia and NZ), European and American. Then I will go through the section.
Jive Records commissioned a music video for the song to be directed by
Nigel Dick. → The song's accompanying
music video was directed by
Nigel Dick. Also, source?
The concept was created by Spears herself → Spears conceptualized the video's treatment, and explained during an interview with MTV in 1999 that "it would be....
...on the film's soundtrack. At first, Grenier didn't wanted to participate. → ...on the film's soundtrack, however, Grenier did not want to participate.
Dick also revealed that he was impressed by the singer's work ethic, saying, "Britney came to the set completely rehearsed. Certainly whenever I worked with her, she had an extraordinary work ethic, which I was always impressed by." → You say what the quotes says, try and paraphrase the quote into prose instead.
The music video premiered on MTV's Making the Video special that aired on July 18, 1999,[27] while debuting on TRL at number four, on August 24, 1999.[28] It is the longest running by a female artist on TRL, staying on the top ten for seventy-three days.[18] → Hmm, this bothers me. The second paragraph needs reworking. Add the premiere date to the first paragraph, expand the second with a much better synopsis, then add the TRL and info after the synopsis, then reviews.
Spears performed "(You Drive Me) Crazy" on several occasions, including → As part of promotion for "(You Drive Me) Crazy"'s release as a single, Spears performed it at the
1999 MTV Europe Music Awards[31] and
1999 Billboard Music Awards.[32]
On 2003, the song was covered by
Richard Cheese. The cover was included on his album, Tuxicity. → In 2003, American musician
Richard Cheese covered "(You Drive Me) Crazy" and included it on his album Tuxicity.
performed a tribute → I don't know why but I always associate the word "tribute", with regard to music, as being something for someone who is either old or dead. Lol. Maybe find another word?
Why do you use [...] instead of (...) for the names of remixes etc.?
Becase when it's a remix, the common is to use [...]. When it's part of the song's name, we use (...). Since the song is (You Drive Me) Crazy, it would make much sense to use (YDM) C (...). That's what I think, but if it needs to be changed, then I'll do it. -
SauloTalk to Me17:52, 1 April 2012 (UTC)reply
No it's okay.
Credits and personnel
Resolved comments
Include the recording location(s)?
Charts and certifications - Weekly Charts
Resolved comments
Years for peak positions are mean't to be in separate tables. So you should have one for 1999 peaks, 2000 peaks and 2012 peak. You could use
this as an example.
Refs 1 and 2 are both Rolling Stone, but are formatted differently? 1's Rolling Stone isn't linked, but the second is. Should be the other way around. Wenner Media should be the publisher for both. Check other Rolling Stone references too.
Ref 38 work is MTV Networks and the publisher is Viacom.
Ref 39 same as ref 38 and need to be unlinked
Ref 40 same as ref 38 and 39 and need to be unlinked.
Ref 41 they don't need to be linked again
Ref 43 they don't need to be linked again
Ref 45 title shouldn't be in capitals
Ref 46 they don't need to be linked again
Ref 48 they don't need to be linked again. You need to make sure that you are consistent with work and publisher parameters and that they are only linked the first time.
Ref 50, 51, 52, 53 Jive don't need to be linked again.
To be honest, I can't actually see where you have made corrections to these?? I picked a few at random and they hadn't been fixed. You need to go through several times.
Aaron •
You Da One