00:3500:35, 10 July 2018diffhist−182
Bicameral mentality
It was not clear when saying "Logos is a similar concept" what concept logos is similar to. Furthermore, logos is the logical structure of an argument as separate from the way an argument is presented. So it does not make sense to call logos a "guiding voice".
00:2700:27, 10 July 2018diffhist+21
Bicameral mentality
The way the sentence was worded, it seemed to imply that the ancients did experience a muse as an auditory hallucination, which would only be true if Bicameralism is true. I reworded it to indicate with greater clarity that the statement is conditional on Jaynes assertions being true.
00:1300:13, 10 July 2018diffhist+48
Bicameral mentality
The cited paper deals tries to find a relationship between external stimulus and hallucinations experienced by schizophrenics. It does not mention bicamerality anywhere in the paper. The paragraph also does not say why this paper supports the hypothesis, only stating that it does.
00:3500:35, 10 July 2018diffhist−182
Bicameral mentality
It was not clear when saying "Logos is a similar concept" what concept logos is similar to. Furthermore, logos is the logical structure of an argument as separate from the way an argument is presented. So it does not make sense to call logos a "guiding voice".
00:2700:27, 10 July 2018diffhist+21
Bicameral mentality
The way the sentence was worded, it seemed to imply that the ancients did experience a muse as an auditory hallucination, which would only be true if Bicameralism is true. I reworded it to indicate with greater clarity that the statement is conditional on Jaynes assertions being true.
00:1300:13, 10 July 2018diffhist+48
Bicameral mentality
The cited paper deals tries to find a relationship between external stimulus and hallucinations experienced by schizophrenics. It does not mention bicamerality anywhere in the paper. The paragraph also does not say why this paper supports the hypothesis, only stating that it does.