09:0209:02, 7 July 2022diffhist+8
HMS Valiant (1914)
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talk) It is an improvement. And consistent with all leads. It states what the subject is first, then relates a subsidiary characteristic of it afterwards. That is what leads do.Tags: UndoRevertedMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
09:0109:01, 7 July 2022diffhist+14
HMS Malaya
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Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) It is an improvement. And consistent with all leads. It states what the subject is first, then relates a subsidiary characteristic of it afterwards. That is what leads do.Tags: UndoRevertedMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
09:0009:00, 7 July 2022diffhist+8
HMS Warspite (03)
Undid revision 1096846725 by
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talk) It is an improvement. And consistent with all leads. It states what the subject is first, then relates a subsidiary characteristic of it afterwards. That is what leads do.Tags: UndoRevertedMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
22:2222:22, 6 July 2022diffhist+8
HMS Warspite (03)
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talk) first, it’s not poor grammar. Second, the lead describes what the vessel is, then an additional characteristic about it. Not leading with the characteristic, rather than what the vessel is.Tags: UndoRevertedMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
09:0209:02, 7 July 2022diffhist+8
HMS Valiant (1914)
Undid revision 1096848472 by
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) It is an improvement. And consistent with all leads. It states what the subject is first, then relates a subsidiary characteristic of it afterwards. That is what leads do.Tags: UndoRevertedMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
09:0109:01, 7 July 2022diffhist+14
HMS Malaya
Undid revision 1096848425 by
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) It is an improvement. And consistent with all leads. It states what the subject is first, then relates a subsidiary characteristic of it afterwards. That is what leads do.Tags: UndoRevertedMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
09:0009:00, 7 July 2022diffhist+8
HMS Warspite (03)
Undid revision 1096846725 by
Specialgel 66 (
talk) It is an improvement. And consistent with all leads. It states what the subject is first, then relates a subsidiary characteristic of it afterwards. That is what leads do.Tags: UndoRevertedMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
22:2222:22, 6 July 2022diffhist+8
HMS Warspite (03)
Undid revision 1096818999 by
Wiki-Ed (
talk) first, it’s not poor grammar. Second, the lead describes what the vessel is, then an additional characteristic about it. Not leading with the characteristic, rather than what the vessel is.Tags: UndoRevertedMobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit