11:4111:41, 21 May 2024diffhist+88
Spanish Armada
Clarify dates in several places as New Style (N.S.) - converted to Gregorian. These events took place closer to England. The Spanish had converted already but England would not convert for another 164 years. If this were written using contemporary English sources, the Battle of Gravelines would be dated 28 July 1588 (the 10 days the Spanish had skipped ahead plus an extra day for the leap day added in 1700 which was not a Gregorian leap year (ends in 00 & not divisible by 400)Tag: Visual edit
17:0417:04, 10 March 2024diffhist+14
First Indochina War
Differentiate this support which definitely came from an ancient Chinese text (with writing dates and single authorship in minor dispute), also studied by American generals like MacArthur, from then new communist China which only came to power during this war.Tag: Visual edit
06:3606:36, 27 February 2024diffhist+363
Amy Grant
→Grammy Awards: Clarify discrepancy between Grammy site which says Grant has 19 nominations as of the 66th ceremony with wiki table which lists 20 total. Grant's name appears beside the other artists nomination but this rule is the reason it does not count under Grant's own Grammy profile.Tag: Visual edit
14:2514:25, 18 February 2024diffhist+137
List of U.S. states and territories by area
Corrected the first of four and the last of four "row totals" at the bottom of the table.to match calculated values. Added 48 to the Contiguous description and similar words to help compare and contrast all four total rows.Corrected the Minor Outlying Islands data to include all nine so grouped.Tags: RevertedVisual edit
11:3211:32, 11 February 2024diffhist+597
Grammy Award for Album of the Year
Separate consecutive year nominations and nominations for consecutive studio albums into different paragraphs. Verify numbers for these two distinctions for those credited with three or more which led to corrections for The Beatles, Sinatra, Streisand and Lamar.Tag: Visual edit
11:2811:28, 8 January 2024diffhist+4
Northern Mariana Islands
Ignoring likely confusion using the word territory with regard to a state, a number of U.S. states have all their coastline in the Pacific ocean just like Hawaii. Adding "island" helps but the articles use of Pacific only thinking about Southern Pacific, tropical or natives is a problem.Tag: Visual edit
21:3021:30, 10 December 2023diffhist+235
Pledge of Allegiance
→Bellamy pledge: added sentence clarifying the impossible timing of Bellamy pledge published before written. Corrected the in line version of the original pledge but did not edit the box showing each version based on vandalism threat. Note the ushistory.org page cited #1 as the authority conflicts with itself. The true original version is on their page (near bottom) within The Youth's Companion, 1892 (perfectly typed) statement. Their first 4 versions are also wrong w comma after nation.Tags: RevertedVisual edit
11:4111:41, 21 May 2024diffhist+88
Spanish Armada
Clarify dates in several places as New Style (N.S.) - converted to Gregorian. These events took place closer to England. The Spanish had converted already but England would not convert for another 164 years. If this were written using contemporary English sources, the Battle of Gravelines would be dated 28 July 1588 (the 10 days the Spanish had skipped ahead plus an extra day for the leap day added in 1700 which was not a Gregorian leap year (ends in 00 & not divisible by 400)Tag: Visual edit
17:0417:04, 10 March 2024diffhist+14
First Indochina War
Differentiate this support which definitely came from an ancient Chinese text (with writing dates and single authorship in minor dispute), also studied by American generals like MacArthur, from then new communist China which only came to power during this war.Tag: Visual edit
06:3606:36, 27 February 2024diffhist+363
Amy Grant
→Grammy Awards: Clarify discrepancy between Grammy site which says Grant has 19 nominations as of the 66th ceremony with wiki table which lists 20 total. Grant's name appears beside the other artists nomination but this rule is the reason it does not count under Grant's own Grammy profile.Tag: Visual edit
14:2514:25, 18 February 2024diffhist+137
List of U.S. states and territories by area
Corrected the first of four and the last of four "row totals" at the bottom of the table.to match calculated values. Added 48 to the Contiguous description and similar words to help compare and contrast all four total rows.Corrected the Minor Outlying Islands data to include all nine so grouped.Tags: RevertedVisual edit
11:3211:32, 11 February 2024diffhist+597
Grammy Award for Album of the Year
Separate consecutive year nominations and nominations for consecutive studio albums into different paragraphs. Verify numbers for these two distinctions for those credited with three or more which led to corrections for The Beatles, Sinatra, Streisand and Lamar.Tag: Visual edit
11:2811:28, 8 January 2024diffhist+4
Northern Mariana Islands
Ignoring likely confusion using the word territory with regard to a state, a number of U.S. states have all their coastline in the Pacific ocean just like Hawaii. Adding "island" helps but the articles use of Pacific only thinking about Southern Pacific, tropical or natives is a problem.Tag: Visual edit
21:3021:30, 10 December 2023diffhist+235
Pledge of Allegiance
→Bellamy pledge: added sentence clarifying the impossible timing of Bellamy pledge published before written. Corrected the in line version of the original pledge but did not edit the box showing each version based on vandalism threat. Note the ushistory.org page cited #1 as the authority conflicts with itself. The true original version is on their page (near bottom) within The Youth's Companion, 1892 (perfectly typed) statement. Their first 4 versions are also wrong w comma after nation.Tags: RevertedVisual edit