18:0118:01, 10 August 2015diffhist+10
Calendar day
Improved the first sentence. A child sitting next to me had to read the first sentence 5 times to understand it. Its written in such a complicated fashion.Tag: Visual edit
4 May 2015
19:3619:36, 4 May 2015diffhist+2
Impressionism
As a reader reading this content, I can't actually understand what are the characteristics of impressionist painting in the first 5 lines. That is completely useless. The original order was not helpful for readers.Tag: Visual edit
18:0118:01, 10 August 2015diffhist+10
Calendar day
Improved the first sentence. A child sitting next to me had to read the first sentence 5 times to understand it. Its written in such a complicated fashion.Tag: Visual edit
4 May 2015
19:3619:36, 4 May 2015diffhist+2
Impressionism
As a reader reading this content, I can't actually understand what are the characteristics of impressionist painting in the first 5 lines. That is completely useless. The original order was not helpful for readers.Tag: Visual edit