19:3619:36, 24 June 2024diffhist−18
Manuscriptology
Amended "Vellum OR parchment - typical writing MATERIAL used in the European codex - ARE not used in India since THE INTRODUCTION OF leather - the material used for vellum AND parchment - ARE considered impure" --> "Vellum AND parchment - typical writing MATERIALS used in the European codex - are not used in India since leather - the material used for vellum AND parchment - IS considered ..."~~~~current
19:3019:30, 24 June 2024diffhist+1
Manuscriptology
Amended "Vellum]] or
parchment - typical writing materials used in the European codex - are not used in India since the introduction of leather - the material used for vellum or parchment - are considered impure"
19 June 2024
01:0501:05, 19 June 2024diffhist+5
m
New Horizons
→History: Amended "The ''New Horizons'' proposal was one of five that officially submitted to NASA." --> "The ''New Horizons'' proposal was one of five that WERE officially submitted to NASA."~~~~
16:4616:46, 5 January 2024diffhist+12
Grade (slope)
In the first few words I distinguished between US usage 'grade' and UK usage 'gradient'. UK has the word 'grade' but very rarely uses it to mean gradient/slope.~~~~
13:1113:11, 5 January 2024diffhist+9
Grade (slope)
Changed "typically grades are used for human-made surfaces" --> "typically the word "grade" is used for human-made surfaces".~~~~
10:4210:42, 1 August 2023diffhist−5
m
Byrhtferth
Amended "the only information we have is THE ONE in his" to "... THAT GIVEN ...". Amended "[The Manual] CAN BE OF GREAT REFERENCE for the study of" to "... IT IS VALUABLE ...". Amended "compiled most of THESE THINGS things from works" to "... THIS MATERIAL ...".~~~~
31 July 2023
18:2818:28, 31 July 2023diffhist−6
m
Location arithmetic
→Multiplication: Amended "Napier PROCEEDED TO multiplication and division on an abacus, AS IT WAS common" to "Napier PERFORMED multiplication and division on an abacus, AS WAS common"; also a few other minor linguistic adjustments.~~~~current
12:5812:58, 18 July 2023diffhist+2
m
Corian
→History: Changed "is credited AS inventing Corian" --> "is credited WITH inventing Corian". "with" is the only correct preposition in British English. If "as" is correct in some other native English-speaking country I apologise!~~~~
17 July 2023
12:3412:34, 17 July 2023diffhist0
m
Ilford Photo
Amended "a management buy out; Harman Technology Ltd, which " --> "a management buy-out, Harman Technology Ltd, which ". ~~~~
13 July 2023
12:3012:30, 13 July 2023diffhist+7
m
Musical argument
In the phrase "Experimental musics may use...", I changed "musics" to "musical forms". I hope this is acceptable.~~~~
6 July 2023
10:4810:48, 6 July 2023diffhist−1
Factoring (finance)
→Rationale: Amended "firms" --> "firm's"; "the services insure the entrepreneurs" --> "these services insure entrepreneurs". I also suspect something illogical in "a major source of a liquidity crises and their equity" but I do not understand finance so will leave that.~~~~
8 April 2023
15:3415:34, 8 April 2023diffhist+24
Robert Estienne
→Religious texts: Polished the English in various places without changing the meaning. E.g. "the most used Greek font ... and it combined" --> "the most widely used Greek font ... . In it he combined"; "contains the Latin translation of Erasmus and the Vulgate" --> "contains Erasmus's Latin translation Erasmus and the Vulgate"; "Scholars have qualified his editing of the Vulgate to be" --> "Scholars have described his editing of the Vulgate as"; etc.~~~~
14:3814:38, 4 April 2023diffhist+3
m
Commodus as Hercules
→Intent: Polished "There is speculation OF the Emperor's intent BY creating depictions of himself" --> "There is speculation ABOUT the Emperor's intent IN creating depictions of himself". ~~~~
13:2213:22, 27 March 2023diffhist−4
m
Firearms unit
→History: Amended "The key to the box was held by a senior officer, AND THEIR permission had to be sought" --> "The key to the box was held by a senior officer, WHOSE permission had to be sought".~~~~
17 March 2023
11:1511:15, 17 March 2023diffhist+89
Communes of France
→Area of a typical commune: Changed "The median area is a better measure of the area of a typical French commune." to "The median area gives a better sense of the size of a *typical* mainland France commune than the average area, since the average includes some very large communes."
23 February 2023
11:1111:11, 23 February 2023diffhist+1
Gooseneck (sailing)
Changed "The boom MOVES from side to side and up and down --> "The boom PIVOTS from side to side and up and down" to make it clear that the boom does not move translationally: at its gooseneck end it stays in place. ~~~~
24 January 2023
18:5318:53, 24 January 2023diffhist+6
Optimates and populares
Amended "historians have pointed the impossibility to apply such labels on" --> "historians have pointed TO the impossibility OF APPLYING such labels TO". ~~~~.
17:2417:24, 11 November 2022diffhist−492
Chicken wire
→Other uses: I deleted a cold-blooded sentence about murder. It is wicked to casually spread sickening thoughts of murder, which is universally recognised to be the greatest crime, especially in a perfectly innocent topic. Research into ghoulish things can be done in fetid, putrid, dark places on the internet, but even there, God sees.~~~~
31 October 2022
15:5515:55, 31 October 2022diffhist−5
m
Barchowsky Fluent Handwriting
Corrected "an US teaching script" five times to "a US teaching script". We use "a" before "US" because the letter U is pronounced /ju/ (exactly the same as the word "you"), and the /j/ prevents any collision between the /ә/ and the /u/. ~~~~
16:0916:09, 8 August 2022diffhist−184
B. B. Warfield
→Books: I have deleted 3 titles near the end of the "Books" list because they are listed (with dates) higher up the list: 'Counterfeit Miracles'; 'Are They Few that Be Saved'; 'The Lord of Glory: A Study of...' ~~~~
19:3619:36, 24 June 2024diffhist−18
Manuscriptology
Amended "Vellum OR parchment - typical writing MATERIAL used in the European codex - ARE not used in India since THE INTRODUCTION OF leather - the material used for vellum AND parchment - ARE considered impure" --> "Vellum AND parchment - typical writing MATERIALS used in the European codex - are not used in India since leather - the material used for vellum AND parchment - IS considered ..."~~~~current
19:3019:30, 24 June 2024diffhist+1
Manuscriptology
Amended "Vellum]] or
parchment - typical writing materials used in the European codex - are not used in India since the introduction of leather - the material used for vellum or parchment - are considered impure"
19 June 2024
01:0501:05, 19 June 2024diffhist+5
m
New Horizons
→History: Amended "The ''New Horizons'' proposal was one of five that officially submitted to NASA." --> "The ''New Horizons'' proposal was one of five that WERE officially submitted to NASA."~~~~
16:4616:46, 5 January 2024diffhist+12
Grade (slope)
In the first few words I distinguished between US usage 'grade' and UK usage 'gradient'. UK has the word 'grade' but very rarely uses it to mean gradient/slope.~~~~
13:1113:11, 5 January 2024diffhist+9
Grade (slope)
Changed "typically grades are used for human-made surfaces" --> "typically the word "grade" is used for human-made surfaces".~~~~
10:4210:42, 1 August 2023diffhist−5
m
Byrhtferth
Amended "the only information we have is THE ONE in his" to "... THAT GIVEN ...". Amended "[The Manual] CAN BE OF GREAT REFERENCE for the study of" to "... IT IS VALUABLE ...". Amended "compiled most of THESE THINGS things from works" to "... THIS MATERIAL ...".~~~~
31 July 2023
18:2818:28, 31 July 2023diffhist−6
m
Location arithmetic
→Multiplication: Amended "Napier PROCEEDED TO multiplication and division on an abacus, AS IT WAS common" to "Napier PERFORMED multiplication and division on an abacus, AS WAS common"; also a few other minor linguistic adjustments.~~~~current
12:5812:58, 18 July 2023diffhist+2
m
Corian
→History: Changed "is credited AS inventing Corian" --> "is credited WITH inventing Corian". "with" is the only correct preposition in British English. If "as" is correct in some other native English-speaking country I apologise!~~~~
17 July 2023
12:3412:34, 17 July 2023diffhist0
m
Ilford Photo
Amended "a management buy out; Harman Technology Ltd, which " --> "a management buy-out, Harman Technology Ltd, which ". ~~~~
13 July 2023
12:3012:30, 13 July 2023diffhist+7
m
Musical argument
In the phrase "Experimental musics may use...", I changed "musics" to "musical forms". I hope this is acceptable.~~~~
6 July 2023
10:4810:48, 6 July 2023diffhist−1
Factoring (finance)
→Rationale: Amended "firms" --> "firm's"; "the services insure the entrepreneurs" --> "these services insure entrepreneurs". I also suspect something illogical in "a major source of a liquidity crises and their equity" but I do not understand finance so will leave that.~~~~
8 April 2023
15:3415:34, 8 April 2023diffhist+24
Robert Estienne
→Religious texts: Polished the English in various places without changing the meaning. E.g. "the most used Greek font ... and it combined" --> "the most widely used Greek font ... . In it he combined"; "contains the Latin translation of Erasmus and the Vulgate" --> "contains Erasmus's Latin translation Erasmus and the Vulgate"; "Scholars have qualified his editing of the Vulgate to be" --> "Scholars have described his editing of the Vulgate as"; etc.~~~~
14:3814:38, 4 April 2023diffhist+3
m
Commodus as Hercules
→Intent: Polished "There is speculation OF the Emperor's intent BY creating depictions of himself" --> "There is speculation ABOUT the Emperor's intent IN creating depictions of himself". ~~~~
13:2213:22, 27 March 2023diffhist−4
m
Firearms unit
→History: Amended "The key to the box was held by a senior officer, AND THEIR permission had to be sought" --> "The key to the box was held by a senior officer, WHOSE permission had to be sought".~~~~
17 March 2023
11:1511:15, 17 March 2023diffhist+89
Communes of France
→Area of a typical commune: Changed "The median area is a better measure of the area of a typical French commune." to "The median area gives a better sense of the size of a *typical* mainland France commune than the average area, since the average includes some very large communes."
23 February 2023
11:1111:11, 23 February 2023diffhist+1
Gooseneck (sailing)
Changed "The boom MOVES from side to side and up and down --> "The boom PIVOTS from side to side and up and down" to make it clear that the boom does not move translationally: at its gooseneck end it stays in place. ~~~~
24 January 2023
18:5318:53, 24 January 2023diffhist+6
Optimates and populares
Amended "historians have pointed the impossibility to apply such labels on" --> "historians have pointed TO the impossibility OF APPLYING such labels TO". ~~~~.
17:2417:24, 11 November 2022diffhist−492
Chicken wire
→Other uses: I deleted a cold-blooded sentence about murder. It is wicked to casually spread sickening thoughts of murder, which is universally recognised to be the greatest crime, especially in a perfectly innocent topic. Research into ghoulish things can be done in fetid, putrid, dark places on the internet, but even there, God sees.~~~~
31 October 2022
15:5515:55, 31 October 2022diffhist−5
m
Barchowsky Fluent Handwriting
Corrected "an US teaching script" five times to "a US teaching script". We use "a" before "US" because the letter U is pronounced /ju/ (exactly the same as the word "you"), and the /j/ prevents any collision between the /ә/ and the /u/. ~~~~
16:0916:09, 8 August 2022diffhist−184
B. B. Warfield
→Books: I have deleted 3 titles near the end of the "Books" list because they are listed (with dates) higher up the list: 'Counterfeit Miracles'; 'Are They Few that Be Saved'; 'The Lord of Glory: A Study of...' ~~~~