17:2717:27, 10 May 2023diffhist+58
Johann Sebastian Bach
This sentence: "After being offered the position, Bach was invited to Leipzig only after Georg Philipp Telemann indicated that he would not be interested ..." makes it sound like JSB was offered the position, then Telemann turned it down, and then JSB was 'invited to Leipzig. I replaced it with something more reasonable, and mentioning also Graupner.',
23 March 2023
15:3515:35, 23 March 2023diffhist+2
Complete-linkage clustering
→Naive scheme: The LHS of the equation in the 'Update the proximity matrix' item is now d((r,s),(k)] ; the new cluster is (r,s) as stated earlier in the sentence, and this is the distance to some other cluster (k).
19:3019:30, 30 September 2021diffhist−104
California
Deleted the following: "in total numbers, California is the largest consumer of water on the entire continent of North America", as this is not meaningful without making clear what it is being compared to.
20:4520:45, 19 April 2020diffhist−15
John Morton
→See also: Formerely said 'co-founder of Baptist faith' ? Not sure where this is from, can't be correct given birth date in 1972, and inconsistent with linked article.
17:2717:27, 10 May 2023diffhist+58
Johann Sebastian Bach
This sentence: "After being offered the position, Bach was invited to Leipzig only after Georg Philipp Telemann indicated that he would not be interested ..." makes it sound like JSB was offered the position, then Telemann turned it down, and then JSB was 'invited to Leipzig. I replaced it with something more reasonable, and mentioning also Graupner.',
23 March 2023
15:3515:35, 23 March 2023diffhist+2
Complete-linkage clustering
→Naive scheme: The LHS of the equation in the 'Update the proximity matrix' item is now d((r,s),(k)] ; the new cluster is (r,s) as stated earlier in the sentence, and this is the distance to some other cluster (k).
19:3019:30, 30 September 2021diffhist−104
California
Deleted the following: "in total numbers, California is the largest consumer of water on the entire continent of North America", as this is not meaningful without making clear what it is being compared to.
20:4520:45, 19 April 2020diffhist−15
John Morton
→See also: Formerely said 'co-founder of Baptist faith' ? Not sure where this is from, can't be correct given birth date in 1972, and inconsistent with linked article.