07:3707:37, 7 June 2018diffhist+124
Dray
Improved wording for parallelism. Consolidated two listings that described the same usage and added two wikilinks within same. Improved the ordering of the items in the list: from most- to least-common usage. -T2.
07:0807:08, 7 June 2018diffhist+60
Drey
→top: Because the alternate spelling listed here ("dray") does not appear in many prominent dictionaries, I have clarified with "uncommonly spelled 'dray' (but not to be confused with '
dray')." Further explication and/or citations on this are encouraged. -T2.
06:0106:01, 7 June 2018diffhist+127
Squirrel
→References: Changed section name to the more appropriate "Further reading" (per MOS:FURTHER). Retained an anchor to the old section name. -T2.
05:5805:58, 7 June 2018diffhist+112
Squirrel
→Notes: Changed section name from "Notes" to the more prevalent "References" (per MOS:FNNR). Retained an anchor to the old section name. -T2.
05:4405:44, 7 June 2018diffhist+141
Squirrel
→Behavior: Improved wording for conciseness and encyclopedic style. Added a wikilink for
gestation,
altricial, and
bird egg. Removed the period from the end of two image captions (for consistency). Corrected "domestic" to "domesticated". -T2.
17:3317:33, 18 May 2018diffhist−652
French Lop
To maintain the scope of this article, removed the "Lifestyle" section, since all information in it was germane to rabbits in general, not to the French Lop specifically. -T2.
17:3117:31, 18 May 2018diffhist−723
French Lop
→Behavior: To maintain the scope of this article, removed the 2nd paragraph, since all information in it was germane to rabbits in general, not to the French Lop specifically. Note that "[Aggression is] less common in the French Lop" was an unsupported opinion. -T2.
17:2717:27, 18 May 2018diffhist−1,918
French Lop
To maintain the scope of this article, removed the "Diet" section, since all information in it was germane to rabbits in general, not to the French Lop specifically. -T2.
17:2417:24, 18 May 2018diffhist−441
French Lop
To maintain the scope of this article, removed the "Breeding" section, since all information in it was germane to rabbits in general, not to the French Lop specifically. -T2.
17:2117:21, 18 May 2018diffhist+517
French Lop
→top: Added a sentence (with two citations) stating this breed is currently recognized by ARBA and the BRC. Adjusted positioning of the image. Corrected image caption: "French Lop" not "French lop". -T2.
16:5516:55, 18 May 2018diffhist−226
French Lop
→History: Removed two sentences regarding details of the (previously redlinked) "Butterfly Rabbit of France", which are outside the scope of this article now that a proper wikilink has been included. -T2.
16:5016:50, 18 May 2018diffhist+66
French Lop
→History: For clarify, added (with a wikilink) "Giant Papillon" as the more familiar version of the breed name, and included the French breed name ("géant papillon français") and its literal translation ("Butterfly Rabbit of France"). -T2.
16:3216:32, 18 May 2018diffhist−55
French Lop
→History: Corrected spelling of past tense of "breed": "bred". Improved wording of the first sentence for brevity and conciseness. -T2.
16:2516:25, 18 May 2018diffhist−24
French Lop
→top: Removed (per WP:NPOV) the word "popular", which in this instance is an unsupported opinion. Improved wording for encyclopedic style, brevity, and accuracy. Added a wikilink for
selective breeding. -T2.
16:0316:03, 18 May 2018diffhist+46
French Lop
→top: Improved one sentence for clarity and accuracy: "[the French Lop] does not have the exaggerated ear length of the English Lop" (instead of "[has] shorter ears"). -T2.
17 May 2018
06:5606:56, 17 May 2018diffhist−209
Soap dish
→History: Removed 3 sentences on the 1st US patent (for the making of potash) since their scope is outside that of this article. Perhaps (with wikilinks added) they may be appropriate for the
Soap article? Thank you anyway. -T2.
10 May 2018
15:1215:12, 10 May 2018diffhist−282
Cinnamon rabbit
Merged the "ARBA standards" section into the "Appearance" section. Retained an anchor to the old section name. -T2.
03:3303:33, 2 May 2018diffhist+1,431
List of rabbit breeds
Added a listing for the Orylag® breed and included two citations. Included a "See main entry" listing for the alternate name "Rex du Poitou". Increased the total count of listings in the table (190+1=191). -T2.
05:5405:54, 26 April 2018diffhist+73
European rabbit
→As an invasive species: Changed to "Twenty-four specimens of the European rabbit" instead of "Twenty-four European rabbits" (since the latter could be interpreted as 24 breeds). Improved wording elsewhere for clarify. -T2.
05:2505:25, 26 April 2018diffhist−100
European rabbit
→As an invasive species: Added parentheses around the clauses in a very long sentence to improve readability. Improved wording for clarity and brevity. Removed "40 million rabbits in November 2004" because it is uncited and because this paragraph does not deal with population sizes.-T2.
04:2304:23, 26 April 2018diffhist+24
European rabbit
→top: Improved the literal for the wikilink: from "Australia" to "Feral European rabbits in Australia" (to better alert the reader to the content of the wikilink). Changed "due to the lack of natural predators" to the more accurate "due in part..." (per the wikilinked article). -T2.
04:0904:09, 26 April 2018diffhist+52
European rabbit
In the "Description" section: removed (deprecated) "double image" template. Improved positioning of two images for better comparison. Added two paragraph breaks to better group the information. -T2.
07:3707:37, 7 June 2018diffhist+124
Dray
Improved wording for parallelism. Consolidated two listings that described the same usage and added two wikilinks within same. Improved the ordering of the items in the list: from most- to least-common usage. -T2.
07:0807:08, 7 June 2018diffhist+60
Drey
→top: Because the alternate spelling listed here ("dray") does not appear in many prominent dictionaries, I have clarified with "uncommonly spelled 'dray' (but not to be confused with '
dray')." Further explication and/or citations on this are encouraged. -T2.
06:0106:01, 7 June 2018diffhist+127
Squirrel
→References: Changed section name to the more appropriate "Further reading" (per MOS:FURTHER). Retained an anchor to the old section name. -T2.
05:5805:58, 7 June 2018diffhist+112
Squirrel
→Notes: Changed section name from "Notes" to the more prevalent "References" (per MOS:FNNR). Retained an anchor to the old section name. -T2.
05:4405:44, 7 June 2018diffhist+141
Squirrel
→Behavior: Improved wording for conciseness and encyclopedic style. Added a wikilink for
gestation,
altricial, and
bird egg. Removed the period from the end of two image captions (for consistency). Corrected "domestic" to "domesticated". -T2.
17:3317:33, 18 May 2018diffhist−652
French Lop
To maintain the scope of this article, removed the "Lifestyle" section, since all information in it was germane to rabbits in general, not to the French Lop specifically. -T2.
17:3117:31, 18 May 2018diffhist−723
French Lop
→Behavior: To maintain the scope of this article, removed the 2nd paragraph, since all information in it was germane to rabbits in general, not to the French Lop specifically. Note that "[Aggression is] less common in the French Lop" was an unsupported opinion. -T2.
17:2717:27, 18 May 2018diffhist−1,918
French Lop
To maintain the scope of this article, removed the "Diet" section, since all information in it was germane to rabbits in general, not to the French Lop specifically. -T2.
17:2417:24, 18 May 2018diffhist−441
French Lop
To maintain the scope of this article, removed the "Breeding" section, since all information in it was germane to rabbits in general, not to the French Lop specifically. -T2.
17:2117:21, 18 May 2018diffhist+517
French Lop
→top: Added a sentence (with two citations) stating this breed is currently recognized by ARBA and the BRC. Adjusted positioning of the image. Corrected image caption: "French Lop" not "French lop". -T2.
16:5516:55, 18 May 2018diffhist−226
French Lop
→History: Removed two sentences regarding details of the (previously redlinked) "Butterfly Rabbit of France", which are outside the scope of this article now that a proper wikilink has been included. -T2.
16:5016:50, 18 May 2018diffhist+66
French Lop
→History: For clarify, added (with a wikilink) "Giant Papillon" as the more familiar version of the breed name, and included the French breed name ("géant papillon français") and its literal translation ("Butterfly Rabbit of France"). -T2.
16:3216:32, 18 May 2018diffhist−55
French Lop
→History: Corrected spelling of past tense of "breed": "bred". Improved wording of the first sentence for brevity and conciseness. -T2.
16:2516:25, 18 May 2018diffhist−24
French Lop
→top: Removed (per WP:NPOV) the word "popular", which in this instance is an unsupported opinion. Improved wording for encyclopedic style, brevity, and accuracy. Added a wikilink for
selective breeding. -T2.
16:0316:03, 18 May 2018diffhist+46
French Lop
→top: Improved one sentence for clarity and accuracy: "[the French Lop] does not have the exaggerated ear length of the English Lop" (instead of "[has] shorter ears"). -T2.
17 May 2018
06:5606:56, 17 May 2018diffhist−209
Soap dish
→History: Removed 3 sentences on the 1st US patent (for the making of potash) since their scope is outside that of this article. Perhaps (with wikilinks added) they may be appropriate for the
Soap article? Thank you anyway. -T2.
10 May 2018
15:1215:12, 10 May 2018diffhist−282
Cinnamon rabbit
Merged the "ARBA standards" section into the "Appearance" section. Retained an anchor to the old section name. -T2.
03:3303:33, 2 May 2018diffhist+1,431
List of rabbit breeds
Added a listing for the Orylag® breed and included two citations. Included a "See main entry" listing for the alternate name "Rex du Poitou". Increased the total count of listings in the table (190+1=191). -T2.
05:5405:54, 26 April 2018diffhist+73
European rabbit
→As an invasive species: Changed to "Twenty-four specimens of the European rabbit" instead of "Twenty-four European rabbits" (since the latter could be interpreted as 24 breeds). Improved wording elsewhere for clarify. -T2.
05:2505:25, 26 April 2018diffhist−100
European rabbit
→As an invasive species: Added parentheses around the clauses in a very long sentence to improve readability. Improved wording for clarity and brevity. Removed "40 million rabbits in November 2004" because it is uncited and because this paragraph does not deal with population sizes.-T2.
04:2304:23, 26 April 2018diffhist+24
European rabbit
→top: Improved the literal for the wikilink: from "Australia" to "Feral European rabbits in Australia" (to better alert the reader to the content of the wikilink). Changed "due to the lack of natural predators" to the more accurate "due in part..." (per the wikilinked article). -T2.
04:0904:09, 26 April 2018diffhist+52
European rabbit
In the "Description" section: removed (deprecated) "double image" template. Improved positioning of two images for better comparison. Added two paragraph breaks to better group the information. -T2.