13:4313:43, 27 May 2017diffhist−11
Manchester Arena bombing
→Casualties: Reverting reversions and altering; "dead victims" is just too clumsy and the article has already mentioned the number of dead three times (including once in the same paragraph.)
12:1812:18, 25 May 2017diffhist−1
m
Cheetham Hill Gang
Fixed punctuation; a list need not be a colon followed by semicolons, especially when the list and its items are not lengthy. See MoS#Colons
13:4313:43, 27 May 2017diffhist−11
Manchester Arena bombing
→Casualties: Reverting reversions and altering; "dead victims" is just too clumsy and the article has already mentioned the number of dead three times (including once in the same paragraph.)
12:1812:18, 25 May 2017diffhist−1
m
Cheetham Hill Gang
Fixed punctuation; a list need not be a colon followed by semicolons, especially when the list and its items are not lengthy. See MoS#Colons