A user with 124 edits. Account created on 21 July 2007.
4 November 2018
- 15:46 15:46, 4 November 2018 diff hist 0 m Ranked voting Replaced semicolon with period
17 May 2018
- 13:52 13:52, 17 May 2018 diff hist +65 m Cambridge Analytica "had not" in italics adds bias. Readers are able to tell the difference between "had" and "had not" without it needing to be stressed. Also, expanded NYT reference to 87 million to include title of article. ~~~~
- 13:50 13:50, 17 May 2018 diff hist +1 m Cambridge Analytica Fixed a coding error (for got slash) ~~~~
- 13:49 13:49, 17 May 2018 diff hist +137 Cambridge Analytica Updated effected users to reflect more recent revelations (87 million, up from 50 million). ~~~~
- 13:43 13:43, 17 May 2018 diff hist +1 m Cambridge Analytica Added two commas for readability. No content changed. ~~~~
17 May 2014
- 20:55 20:55, 17 May 2014 diff hist +32 m Black Stone ~~~~
3 March 2014
- 19:04 19:04, 3 March 2014 diff hist +22 Stereotypes of Arabs and Muslims in the United States Questioned use of "often" in describing negative impact of stereotypes. NPOV concern. "can have" would be more neutral? ~~~~
27 February 2014
- 21:32 21:32, 27 February 2014 diff hist +27 Talk:Islamism →Counter-response: Spelling corrections. I was tired when I wrote this comment. :) ~~~~
25 February 2014
- 18:44 18:44, 25 February 2014 diff hist +1,070 Talk:Islamism Added Talk section "== Counter-response ==" ~~~~
- 18:35 18:35, 25 February 2014 diff hist +11 Islamism →Counter-response: USG efforts explicitly counter "terrorism," not "Islamism." Citations do not mention Islamism in context of "counter-response."
- 18:12 18:12, 25 February 2014 diff hist +18 m Islamism →Definitions: Small grammar syntax corrections for readability. ~~~~
24 February 2014
- 23:10 23:10, 24 February 2014 diff hist +53 m Islamism →Definitions: Edited description attributed to Graham Fuller for clarity. Edited Oliver Roy references to smooth over revisions from different editors. ~~~~
- 22:58 22:58, 24 February 2014 diff hist +42 m Islamism →Definitions: Edited section on rejecting Democracy for clarity/ ~~~~
- 22:34 22:34, 24 February 2014 diff hist +28 m Islamism →Definitions: Edit for readability/clarity.
- 22:29 22:29, 24 February 2014 diff hist −31 Islamism →Definitions: Removed {{by whom|date=December 2013}} tag because definitions are cited. ~~~~
8 November 2013
- 00:22 00:22, 8 November 2013 diff hist +19 Muslim Brotherhood Added {{Citation needed}} after "stated goal" ~~~~
6 November 2013
- 01:36 01:36, 6 November 2013 diff hist −1 m Usul al-fiqh ~~~~
- 01:35 01:35, 6 November 2013 diff hist −56 Usul al-fiqh "legal theory" is not literal translation. Correct idea, but "literally" necessitates... literalness. "Proofs of fiqh" is perhaps preferable, as "fiqh" does not have a direct English corollary, but 'understanding' is an early approximation. ~~~~
30 July 2013
- 06:06 06:06, 30 July 2013 diff hist +96 Mary Poppins (book series) →1964 film: Added reference to Disney movie "Saving Mr. Banks" Tag: Visual edit
17 July 2013
- 21:57 21:57, 17 July 2013 diff hist −23 Wikipedia:WikiProject Christianity/Outreach/Full content delivery →Subscription list: Removed self from list ~~~~
- 21:53 21:53, 17 July 2013 diff hist −8 m Banu Nadir Corrected link name to accurately reflect name of the page to which it links. ("Muhammad and the Jews of Medina," not "Prophet Muhammad and the Jews of Medina.") Tag: Visual edit
- 21:51 21:51, 17 July 2013 diff hist −70 m Banu Nadir Changed all instances of "Prophet Muhammad" to "Muhammad" to maintain NPOV. Tag: Visual edit
- 21:48 21:48, 17 July 2013 diff hist −112 m Banu Nadir Changed "Prophet Muhammad" to "Muhammad" to maintain NPOV. Tag: Visual edit
16 July 2013
- 19:55 19:55, 16 July 2013 diff hist +515 Talk:United States legal system ~~~~
- 19:49 19:49, 16 July 2013 diff hist +54 United States legal system →Chances of being found not guilty: ~~~~
11 June 2013
- 04:59 04:59, 11 June 2013 diff hist +45 Talk:List of burn centers in the United States →Vandalism
- 04:51 04:51, 11 June 2013 diff hist +20 List of burn centers in the United States →California
7 July 2012
- 15:48 15:48, 7 July 2012 diff hist +107 m Mahfouz Ould al-Walid Added Arabic title of al Akhbar article. ~~~~
- 15:40 15:40, 7 July 2012 diff hist +232 Mahfouz Ould al-Walid Added Al Akhbar report of Al-Walid's release. ~~~~
29 April 2012
- 02:08 02:08, 29 April 2012 diff hist +38 Joseph Wolff →His travels: Added "Citation Needed" for quotes. ~~~~
7 April 2012
- 19:47 19:47, 7 April 2012 diff hist +11 Jyllands-Posten Muhammad cartoons controversy →Economic and social consequences (February 2006 - September 2006): Claim that most protests were due to police firing into crowds is unsubstantiated (and even undermined) by the reference. ~~~~
3 February 2012
- 16:43 16:43, 3 February 2012 diff hist −95 C. I. Scofield →References: Removed editorial comments regarding "bias" of authors listed in this section. Bias should be discussed in main section of article, or in separate articles. Otherwise, it is unsubstanitated editorializing. ~~~~
28 November 2011
- 02:16 02:16, 28 November 2011 diff hist +2 m 1948 Arab–Israeli War →Background: ~~~~ changed "mandate rule" to "mandatory rule" (grammar)
- 02:15 02:15, 28 November 2011 diff hist +76 1948 Arab–Israeli War →Background: Treaty of 1936 was not drafted under colonial rule. Sentiment is reasonable, but will need citation to meet standards of objectivity. ~~~~
- 02:07 02:07, 28 November 2011 diff hist +13 1948 Arab–Israeli War →Background: League of Nations mandates were technically not colonies. "Colonial rule" is therefore a value judgment warranting further discussion. Edited to read "mandate rule" with a link to wiki on "League of Nations mandates." ~~~~
4 November 2011
- 04:20 04:20, 4 November 2011 diff hist −51 m Hamas ~~~~ Minor edit to remove redundancy (changed my own edit from "The 1988 charter" to "The charter").
- 04:18 04:18, 4 November 2011 diff hist +342 Hamas ~~~~ Edited comment regarding anti-semitic conspiracy theories to more accurately reflect that the controversy lies with the statements of HAMAS leadership, and not with the charter itself (which is explicitly conspiratorial).
9 September 2011
- 05:59 05:59, 9 September 2011 diff hist −273 Timeline of 7th-century Muslim history →Seventh century (601 - 700): Removed "PBUH" formula. Purely religious, and serves no academic purpose in this context. ~~~~
- 05:57 05:57, 9 September 2011 diff hist −411 Timeline of 6th-century Muslim history →Sixth century (501-600): Removed "PBUH" formula. It is a religious statement and serves no academic purpose in this context. ~~~~
28 July 2011
- 19:13 19:13, 28 July 2011 diff hist +10 m Muslim Brotherhood ~~~~
- 19:12 19:12, 28 July 2011 diff hist −2 m Muslim Brotherhood ~~~~ (I suck at getting coding on WP right. :( )
- 19:09 19:09, 28 July 2011 diff hist −18 m Muslim Brotherhood ~~~~
- 19:06 19:06, 28 July 2011 diff hist +48 Muslim Brotherhood OBL's comments about Muslim Brotherhood verfied only by internal Muslim brotherhood opinion pages. ~~~~
8 August 2010
- 19:55 19:55, 8 August 2010 diff hist 0 m Jesus in Christianity →Other views
- 19:51 19:51, 8 August 2010 diff hist −1 m Jesus in Christianity →Other views
- 19:50 19:50, 8 August 2010 diff hist +46 m Jesus in Christianity →Other views: Added "{{Editorialization: Citation needed}}" to the statement "The view is looked down upon by most other branches of Christianity."
- 19:45 19:45, 8 August 2010 diff hist +276 Talk:Messiah Added "Consistency in quoted versions of Biblical passages compared to linked versions?" section ~~~~
22 July 2009
- 01:50 01:50, 22 July 2009 diff hist +18 Propitiation {{NPOV language}} Extensive use of "He" which evidences a gender-biased anthropomorphic view of God (God is neither male nor female). ~~~~
8 July 2009
- 19:34 19:34, 8 July 2009 diff hist +8 m Kyriarchy No edit summary
- 19:34 19:34, 8 July 2009 diff hist +553 m Kyriarchy Added definition. Sorry, don't know how to set up the citation hyperlinks :P
A user with 124 edits. Account created on 21 July 2007.
4 November 2018
- 15:46 15:46, 4 November 2018 diff hist 0 m Ranked voting Replaced semicolon with period
17 May 2018
- 13:52 13:52, 17 May 2018 diff hist +65 m Cambridge Analytica "had not" in italics adds bias. Readers are able to tell the difference between "had" and "had not" without it needing to be stressed. Also, expanded NYT reference to 87 million to include title of article. ~~~~
- 13:50 13:50, 17 May 2018 diff hist +1 m Cambridge Analytica Fixed a coding error (for got slash) ~~~~
- 13:49 13:49, 17 May 2018 diff hist +137 Cambridge Analytica Updated effected users to reflect more recent revelations (87 million, up from 50 million). ~~~~
- 13:43 13:43, 17 May 2018 diff hist +1 m Cambridge Analytica Added two commas for readability. No content changed. ~~~~
17 May 2014
- 20:55 20:55, 17 May 2014 diff hist +32 m Black Stone ~~~~
3 March 2014
- 19:04 19:04, 3 March 2014 diff hist +22 Stereotypes of Arabs and Muslims in the United States Questioned use of "often" in describing negative impact of stereotypes. NPOV concern. "can have" would be more neutral? ~~~~
27 February 2014
- 21:32 21:32, 27 February 2014 diff hist +27 Talk:Islamism →Counter-response: Spelling corrections. I was tired when I wrote this comment. :) ~~~~
25 February 2014
- 18:44 18:44, 25 February 2014 diff hist +1,070 Talk:Islamism Added Talk section "== Counter-response ==" ~~~~
- 18:35 18:35, 25 February 2014 diff hist +11 Islamism →Counter-response: USG efforts explicitly counter "terrorism," not "Islamism." Citations do not mention Islamism in context of "counter-response."
- 18:12 18:12, 25 February 2014 diff hist +18 m Islamism →Definitions: Small grammar syntax corrections for readability. ~~~~
24 February 2014
- 23:10 23:10, 24 February 2014 diff hist +53 m Islamism →Definitions: Edited description attributed to Graham Fuller for clarity. Edited Oliver Roy references to smooth over revisions from different editors. ~~~~
- 22:58 22:58, 24 February 2014 diff hist +42 m Islamism →Definitions: Edited section on rejecting Democracy for clarity/ ~~~~
- 22:34 22:34, 24 February 2014 diff hist +28 m Islamism →Definitions: Edit for readability/clarity.
- 22:29 22:29, 24 February 2014 diff hist −31 Islamism →Definitions: Removed {{by whom|date=December 2013}} tag because definitions are cited. ~~~~
8 November 2013
- 00:22 00:22, 8 November 2013 diff hist +19 Muslim Brotherhood Added {{Citation needed}} after "stated goal" ~~~~
6 November 2013
- 01:36 01:36, 6 November 2013 diff hist −1 m Usul al-fiqh ~~~~
- 01:35 01:35, 6 November 2013 diff hist −56 Usul al-fiqh "legal theory" is not literal translation. Correct idea, but "literally" necessitates... literalness. "Proofs of fiqh" is perhaps preferable, as "fiqh" does not have a direct English corollary, but 'understanding' is an early approximation. ~~~~
30 July 2013
- 06:06 06:06, 30 July 2013 diff hist +96 Mary Poppins (book series) →1964 film: Added reference to Disney movie "Saving Mr. Banks" Tag: Visual edit
17 July 2013
- 21:57 21:57, 17 July 2013 diff hist −23 Wikipedia:WikiProject Christianity/Outreach/Full content delivery →Subscription list: Removed self from list ~~~~
- 21:53 21:53, 17 July 2013 diff hist −8 m Banu Nadir Corrected link name to accurately reflect name of the page to which it links. ("Muhammad and the Jews of Medina," not "Prophet Muhammad and the Jews of Medina.") Tag: Visual edit
- 21:51 21:51, 17 July 2013 diff hist −70 m Banu Nadir Changed all instances of "Prophet Muhammad" to "Muhammad" to maintain NPOV. Tag: Visual edit
- 21:48 21:48, 17 July 2013 diff hist −112 m Banu Nadir Changed "Prophet Muhammad" to "Muhammad" to maintain NPOV. Tag: Visual edit
16 July 2013
- 19:55 19:55, 16 July 2013 diff hist +515 Talk:United States legal system ~~~~
- 19:49 19:49, 16 July 2013 diff hist +54 United States legal system →Chances of being found not guilty: ~~~~
11 June 2013
- 04:59 04:59, 11 June 2013 diff hist +45 Talk:List of burn centers in the United States →Vandalism
- 04:51 04:51, 11 June 2013 diff hist +20 List of burn centers in the United States →California
7 July 2012
- 15:48 15:48, 7 July 2012 diff hist +107 m Mahfouz Ould al-Walid Added Arabic title of al Akhbar article. ~~~~
- 15:40 15:40, 7 July 2012 diff hist +232 Mahfouz Ould al-Walid Added Al Akhbar report of Al-Walid's release. ~~~~
29 April 2012
- 02:08 02:08, 29 April 2012 diff hist +38 Joseph Wolff →His travels: Added "Citation Needed" for quotes. ~~~~
7 April 2012
- 19:47 19:47, 7 April 2012 diff hist +11 Jyllands-Posten Muhammad cartoons controversy →Economic and social consequences (February 2006 - September 2006): Claim that most protests were due to police firing into crowds is unsubstantiated (and even undermined) by the reference. ~~~~
3 February 2012
- 16:43 16:43, 3 February 2012 diff hist −95 C. I. Scofield →References: Removed editorial comments regarding "bias" of authors listed in this section. Bias should be discussed in main section of article, or in separate articles. Otherwise, it is unsubstanitated editorializing. ~~~~
28 November 2011
- 02:16 02:16, 28 November 2011 diff hist +2 m 1948 Arab–Israeli War →Background: ~~~~ changed "mandate rule" to "mandatory rule" (grammar)
- 02:15 02:15, 28 November 2011 diff hist +76 1948 Arab–Israeli War →Background: Treaty of 1936 was not drafted under colonial rule. Sentiment is reasonable, but will need citation to meet standards of objectivity. ~~~~
- 02:07 02:07, 28 November 2011 diff hist +13 1948 Arab–Israeli War →Background: League of Nations mandates were technically not colonies. "Colonial rule" is therefore a value judgment warranting further discussion. Edited to read "mandate rule" with a link to wiki on "League of Nations mandates." ~~~~
4 November 2011
- 04:20 04:20, 4 November 2011 diff hist −51 m Hamas ~~~~ Minor edit to remove redundancy (changed my own edit from "The 1988 charter" to "The charter").
- 04:18 04:18, 4 November 2011 diff hist +342 Hamas ~~~~ Edited comment regarding anti-semitic conspiracy theories to more accurately reflect that the controversy lies with the statements of HAMAS leadership, and not with the charter itself (which is explicitly conspiratorial).
9 September 2011
- 05:59 05:59, 9 September 2011 diff hist −273 Timeline of 7th-century Muslim history →Seventh century (601 - 700): Removed "PBUH" formula. Purely religious, and serves no academic purpose in this context. ~~~~
- 05:57 05:57, 9 September 2011 diff hist −411 Timeline of 6th-century Muslim history →Sixth century (501-600): Removed "PBUH" formula. It is a religious statement and serves no academic purpose in this context. ~~~~
28 July 2011
- 19:13 19:13, 28 July 2011 diff hist +10 m Muslim Brotherhood ~~~~
- 19:12 19:12, 28 July 2011 diff hist −2 m Muslim Brotherhood ~~~~ (I suck at getting coding on WP right. :( )
- 19:09 19:09, 28 July 2011 diff hist −18 m Muslim Brotherhood ~~~~
- 19:06 19:06, 28 July 2011 diff hist +48 Muslim Brotherhood OBL's comments about Muslim Brotherhood verfied only by internal Muslim brotherhood opinion pages. ~~~~
8 August 2010
- 19:55 19:55, 8 August 2010 diff hist 0 m Jesus in Christianity →Other views
- 19:51 19:51, 8 August 2010 diff hist −1 m Jesus in Christianity →Other views
- 19:50 19:50, 8 August 2010 diff hist +46 m Jesus in Christianity →Other views: Added "{{Editorialization: Citation needed}}" to the statement "The view is looked down upon by most other branches of Christianity."
- 19:45 19:45, 8 August 2010 diff hist +276 Talk:Messiah Added "Consistency in quoted versions of Biblical passages compared to linked versions?" section ~~~~
22 July 2009
- 01:50 01:50, 22 July 2009 diff hist +18 Propitiation {{NPOV language}} Extensive use of "He" which evidences a gender-biased anthropomorphic view of God (God is neither male nor female). ~~~~
8 July 2009
- 19:34 19:34, 8 July 2009 diff hist +8 m Kyriarchy No edit summary
- 19:34 19:34, 8 July 2009 diff hist +553 m Kyriarchy Added definition. Sorry, don't know how to set up the citation hyperlinks :P