13:0313:03, 21 September 2020diffhist−92
2002 Indianapolis 500
Fixed wrong word choice, removed sentence about "largely considered" which did not have any of the context or explanation that such a sentence would need, and fixed poor writing which did not use pronouns correctlyTag: Reverted
12:4012:40, 21 September 2020diffhist−184
Dario Franchitti
Fixed atrocious writing in lead, inappropriate use of contractions, lots of grammar errors, needless fragmentation - it is still too long but at least it is four paragraphs, not sixTag: Reverted
13:0313:03, 21 September 2020diffhist−92
2002 Indianapolis 500
Fixed wrong word choice, removed sentence about "largely considered" which did not have any of the context or explanation that such a sentence would need, and fixed poor writing which did not use pronouns correctlyTag: Reverted
12:4012:40, 21 September 2020diffhist−184
Dario Franchitti
Fixed atrocious writing in lead, inappropriate use of contractions, lots of grammar errors, needless fragmentation - it is still too long but at least it is four paragraphs, not sixTag: Reverted