17:3417:34, 3 January 2012diffhist+97
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Ben Dover
additional comma in first sentence and added another sentence at the end, which I believe is correct.
07:5607:56, 31 December 2011diffhist+43
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Linzi Drew
Page tidy-up with Forum referenced to Penthouse Forum entry - and my entry ref Irvine Welsh's novel Porno placed on a separate paragaph.
17:3417:34, 3 January 2012diffhist+97
m
Ben Dover
additional comma in first sentence and added another sentence at the end, which I believe is correct.
07:5607:56, 31 December 2011diffhist+43
m
Linzi Drew
Page tidy-up with Forum referenced to Penthouse Forum entry - and my entry ref Irvine Welsh's novel Porno placed on a separate paragaph.