02:2602:26, 4 July 2024diffhist+177
The Hidden Harbor Mystery
Clarified 'Hidden Harbor' in the revised version: it is not a recognized locale (where people might live) as it is in the original. The term is a clue the Hardy Boys find: a century-old reference to a geographical feature that is no longer there.current
28 June 2024
20:3120:31, 28 June 2024diffhist−3
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Jim Palmer
Removed the second 'in' from 'The Palmers have homes in Palm Beach, Florida and [in] Corona Del Mar, California.' To me, repeating 'in' implies they have homes, plural, in both locations.
08:1608:16, 19 May 2023diffhist−13
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Philip Baker Hall
Vincent Canby's quote (1st para under 'Career') is a complex noun phrase, not a clause; modified the sentence to reflect this.
08:2008:20, 1 May 2023diffhist0
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Apotropaic magic
Two more instance of 'ward-off' changed to 'ward off'. It's verb and adverb; there's no cause whatsoever for the hyphen.
15:0515:05, 22 February 2019diffhist−38
Taste
Removed a "citation needed" in the intro section because the text immediately following the tag—which IS properly cited—amplifies and explains the statement "Scientific experiments have demonstrated that these five tastes exist and are distinct from one another."
09:5009:50, 26 August 2018diffhist+11
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Alien: Covenant
Edited lead paragraph for clarity: As it was "...the second installment in the ... series" could have been an appositive modifying _Prometheus_ rather than continuation of a compound predicate.
02:2602:26, 4 July 2024diffhist+177
The Hidden Harbor Mystery
Clarified 'Hidden Harbor' in the revised version: it is not a recognized locale (where people might live) as it is in the original. The term is a clue the Hardy Boys find: a century-old reference to a geographical feature that is no longer there.current
28 June 2024
20:3120:31, 28 June 2024diffhist−3
m
Jim Palmer
Removed the second 'in' from 'The Palmers have homes in Palm Beach, Florida and [in] Corona Del Mar, California.' To me, repeating 'in' implies they have homes, plural, in both locations.
08:1608:16, 19 May 2023diffhist−13
m
Philip Baker Hall
Vincent Canby's quote (1st para under 'Career') is a complex noun phrase, not a clause; modified the sentence to reflect this.
08:2008:20, 1 May 2023diffhist0
m
Apotropaic magic
Two more instance of 'ward-off' changed to 'ward off'. It's verb and adverb; there's no cause whatsoever for the hyphen.
15:0515:05, 22 February 2019diffhist−38
Taste
Removed a "citation needed" in the intro section because the text immediately following the tag—which IS properly cited—amplifies and explains the statement "Scientific experiments have demonstrated that these five tastes exist and are distinct from one another."
09:5009:50, 26 August 2018diffhist+11
m
Alien: Covenant
Edited lead paragraph for clarity: As it was "...the second installment in the ... series" could have been an appositive modifying _Prometheus_ rather than continuation of a compound predicate.