19:2219:22, 13 April 2024diffhist+283
Draft:Brad Feuer
Subjective, qualitative assertions removed to be more neutral, objective. Clarified criteria used to establish notoriety by adding documentation regarding his status as a fellow of a major scholarly society which reserves fellow status as a highly selective honor. Notability also established by substantial impact outside academia in his academic capacity (his work led to the establishment of international guidelines and a transformation in the quality of medical care provided on cruise ships)Tag: Visual edit
21:4921:49, 9 December 2023diffhist+1,702
Draft:Brad Feuer
Increased focus on what makes the subject notable. Addition of multiple secondary sources that are reliable, intellectually independent of each other, and independent of the subject.Tags: RevertedVisual edit
02:3802:38, 4 December 2023diffhist+950
Draft:Brad Feuer
Additional detail regarding what he is noted for, along with citing published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject
21:0421:04, 11 January 2023diffhist+2,965
Draft:Brad Feuer
Clarified notoriety and added significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject.
19:2219:22, 13 April 2024diffhist+283
Draft:Brad Feuer
Subjective, qualitative assertions removed to be more neutral, objective. Clarified criteria used to establish notoriety by adding documentation regarding his status as a fellow of a major scholarly society which reserves fellow status as a highly selective honor. Notability also established by substantial impact outside academia in his academic capacity (his work led to the establishment of international guidelines and a transformation in the quality of medical care provided on cruise ships)Tag: Visual edit
21:4921:49, 9 December 2023diffhist+1,702
Draft:Brad Feuer
Increased focus on what makes the subject notable. Addition of multiple secondary sources that are reliable, intellectually independent of each other, and independent of the subject.Tags: RevertedVisual edit
02:3802:38, 4 December 2023diffhist+950
Draft:Brad Feuer
Additional detail regarding what he is noted for, along with citing published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject
21:0421:04, 11 January 2023diffhist+2,965
Draft:Brad Feuer
Clarified notoriety and added significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject.