15:4515:45, 13 May 2017diffhist−428
Allan Markin
repetitive. Already mentioned and cited under Education and Career section. Choose one or the other; no need for both.
15:5015:50, 11 May 2017diffhist−14
Allan Markin
removed loaded word "abrupt" (no evidence Markin made a sudden decision) and changed "appears" to "may" to be more neutral in presentation
15:4815:48, 11 May 2017diffhist−13
Allan Markin
put wording into a more neutral point of view, citing simply the fact without using loaded words ("barred").
15:4615:46, 11 May 2017diffhist−68
Allan Markin
rewrote in a more neutral tone to state factually what actually happened, but retained the link to the material speculating on what Markin's reasons for leaving might have been
17:0117:01, 10 May 2017diffhist−401
Allan Markin
rewording of speculation about Markin's reasons for leaving CNRL; removing it from the career section where it is inconsistent with other career references
17:4117:41, 9 May 2017diffhist+60
Allan Markin
Improved accuracy (CNRL did not ban the program - article cited notes many employees still participate but CNRL no longer pays) and put the unknown reasons for Markin resignation into more neutral language.
17:3417:34, 9 May 2017diffhist−375
Allan Markin
removed speculative material. Even the source cited does not claim it as fact. Let's just stick to facts to avoid turning this page into some kind of war about Markin's character.
15:4515:45, 13 May 2017diffhist−428
Allan Markin
repetitive. Already mentioned and cited under Education and Career section. Choose one or the other; no need for both.
15:5015:50, 11 May 2017diffhist−14
Allan Markin
removed loaded word "abrupt" (no evidence Markin made a sudden decision) and changed "appears" to "may" to be more neutral in presentation
15:4815:48, 11 May 2017diffhist−13
Allan Markin
put wording into a more neutral point of view, citing simply the fact without using loaded words ("barred").
15:4615:46, 11 May 2017diffhist−68
Allan Markin
rewrote in a more neutral tone to state factually what actually happened, but retained the link to the material speculating on what Markin's reasons for leaving might have been
17:0117:01, 10 May 2017diffhist−401
Allan Markin
rewording of speculation about Markin's reasons for leaving CNRL; removing it from the career section where it is inconsistent with other career references
17:4117:41, 9 May 2017diffhist+60
Allan Markin
Improved accuracy (CNRL did not ban the program - article cited notes many employees still participate but CNRL no longer pays) and put the unknown reasons for Markin resignation into more neutral language.
17:3417:34, 9 May 2017diffhist−375
Allan Markin
removed speculative material. Even the source cited does not claim it as fact. Let's just stick to facts to avoid turning this page into some kind of war about Markin's character.