09:4509:45, 19 March 2024diffhist+5,828
Draft:Farid Allawerdi
after adding reference within and after each paragraph, i have further elaborated within each reference by including a locator to identify the quote or paraphrase
11:3111:31, 18 March 2024diffhist+423
Draft:Farid Allawerdi
I have checked the published obituary information and made sure that what i have included in the article is fully covered by the obituary that is listed in the references. I have also removed all external links from the body of the article and created a section at the end for the external links and also external wiki links.
09:4509:45, 19 March 2024diffhist+5,828
Draft:Farid Allawerdi
after adding reference within and after each paragraph, i have further elaborated within each reference by including a locator to identify the quote or paraphrase
11:3111:31, 18 March 2024diffhist+423
Draft:Farid Allawerdi
I have checked the published obituary information and made sure that what i have included in the article is fully covered by the obituary that is listed in the references. I have also removed all external links from the body of the article and created a section at the end for the external links and also external wiki links.