05:3105:31, 11 August 2007diffhist+305
Adelle Davis
the paragraph states the truth, as is shown by the rest of the article, and should not be removed from the intro
00:5100:51, 23 May 2007diffhist+50
m
Monte Ne
"mostly submerged" is an inferior expression in this context; there are many superior alternatives :). Just my viewpoint. Also rephrase.
05:3105:31, 11 August 2007diffhist+305
Adelle Davis
the paragraph states the truth, as is shown by the rest of the article, and should not be removed from the intro
00:5100:51, 23 May 2007diffhist+50
m
Monte Ne
"mostly submerged" is an inferior expression in this context; there are many superior alternatives :). Just my viewpoint. Also rephrase.