14:2514:25, 3 June 2024diffhist−26
Hackney Diamonds
Trimmed sentence in lead about marketing (although I agree with the editors opinion on talk page that the marketing isn’t leadworthy, imo it comes off like a press release when a bunch of things are listed like that)Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
06:4306:43, 3 June 2024diffhist−6,171
Hackney Diamonds
→Critical reception: trimmed critical reception section since editor who said they would trim it down has not done so half a year after saying they would in 48 hours and multiple other editors have complained about it on talk, rewrote & slightly trimmed list paragraph so it's not so droning [could probably be better presented in table format], changed two reviews in infobox to balance it better and feature more standard publications
12:2312:23, 4 May 2024diffhist+439
Chinese Democracy
→Background: There’s probably a better way to word this, but added Freese’s anecdote about joining because he could contribute songwritingTags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
14:2514:25, 3 June 2024diffhist−26
Hackney Diamonds
Trimmed sentence in lead about marketing (although I agree with the editors opinion on talk page that the marketing isn’t leadworthy, imo it comes off like a press release when a bunch of things are listed like that)Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
06:4306:43, 3 June 2024diffhist−6,171
Hackney Diamonds
→Critical reception: trimmed critical reception section since editor who said they would trim it down has not done so half a year after saying they would in 48 hours and multiple other editors have complained about it on talk, rewrote & slightly trimmed list paragraph so it's not so droning [could probably be better presented in table format], changed two reviews in infobox to balance it better and feature more standard publications
12:2312:23, 4 May 2024diffhist+439
Chinese Democracy
→Background: There’s probably a better way to word this, but added Freese’s anecdote about joining because he could contribute songwritingTags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit