10:5310:53, 13 August 2021diffhist−352
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Tom Mueller
Replaced clumsily structured extraneous detail about an engine retired decades before his career began with two significant details of the subject engine.
11:2311:23, 11 December 2018diffhist+24
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Douglas Engelbart
Reworked for clarity and readability. "NLS" is an important reference in the document and its origin in the document was unclear, linked to Wikipedia page
09:1109:11, 19 June 2018diffhist−10
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Neutron activation
Reworked the example in the last paragraph for readability. Previously the subject of the example was the last word in the paragraph. Changed some verb tenses. Replaced 'fairly unique' with 'very unusual.'
13:4913:49, 26 September 2016diffhist0
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Gary Player
Moved the adverb phrase "as 'laughable'" next to the verb it qualified: branded. Made paragraph two sentences by changing "and Warned" into ". He warned..."
10:5310:53, 13 August 2021diffhist−352
m
Tom Mueller
Replaced clumsily structured extraneous detail about an engine retired decades before his career began with two significant details of the subject engine.
11:2311:23, 11 December 2018diffhist+24
m
Douglas Engelbart
Reworked for clarity and readability. "NLS" is an important reference in the document and its origin in the document was unclear, linked to Wikipedia page
09:1109:11, 19 June 2018diffhist−10
m
Neutron activation
Reworked the example in the last paragraph for readability. Previously the subject of the example was the last word in the paragraph. Changed some verb tenses. Replaced 'fairly unique' with 'very unusual.'
13:4913:49, 26 September 2016diffhist0
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Gary Player
Moved the adverb phrase "as 'laughable'" next to the verb it qualified: branded. Made paragraph two sentences by changing "and Warned" into ". He warned..."