19:2719:27, 29 August 2011diffhist+5
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Fading Echoes
I fixed a few grammar errors. I changed "From Leafpool's help" to "With Leafpool's help" because it made no sense. I also added a "the" to "the cats of the Dark Forest" because they are a specific group.
19:2719:27, 29 August 2011diffhist+5
m
Fading Echoes
I fixed a few grammar errors. I changed "From Leafpool's help" to "With Leafpool's help" because it made no sense. I also added a "the" to "the cats of the Dark Forest" because they are a specific group.