18:1618:16, 29 June 2024diffhist−300
Dr Disrespect
various cleanup, copy edit; saying "his channel was removed" immediately after "permanently banned" seems unnecessary; he portrayed Dr Disrespect in these games, which is technically not himself
17:2217:22, 29 June 2024diffhist−3,958
Dr Disrespect
WP:BOLDly rm aim assist sub-section; seems trivial and
WP:UNDUE. If this is actually a notable gimmick of his persona (rather than a random opinion), it should be re-written and trimmed to one or two sentences, rather than a full paragraph and sub-section.
17:1317:13, 29 June 2024diffhist−312
Dr Disrespect
trim, copy edit; move statements from the Discord spokesperson and Ryan Wyatt down so the section isn't jumping back-and-forth between timelines and pre-explaining the story, +YouTube suspending him from the partner program
21:3421:34, 27 June 2024diffhist−1
James Gunn
Reverted
good faith edits by
BarntToust (
talk): It's subjective, but I disagree on this photo being better. His mouth is open and he has a strange expression (likely trying to focus on the camera). In the other, he is actually smiling and posing. Brightness/crop can be adjusted if needed.Tags: TwinkleUndoReverted
18:1618:16, 29 June 2024diffhist−300
Dr Disrespect
various cleanup, copy edit; saying "his channel was removed" immediately after "permanently banned" seems unnecessary; he portrayed Dr Disrespect in these games, which is technically not himself
17:2217:22, 29 June 2024diffhist−3,958
Dr Disrespect
WP:BOLDly rm aim assist sub-section; seems trivial and
WP:UNDUE. If this is actually a notable gimmick of his persona (rather than a random opinion), it should be re-written and trimmed to one or two sentences, rather than a full paragraph and sub-section.
17:1317:13, 29 June 2024diffhist−312
Dr Disrespect
trim, copy edit; move statements from the Discord spokesperson and Ryan Wyatt down so the section isn't jumping back-and-forth between timelines and pre-explaining the story, +YouTube suspending him from the partner program
21:3421:34, 27 June 2024diffhist−1
James Gunn
Reverted
good faith edits by
BarntToust (
talk): It's subjective, but I disagree on this photo being better. His mouth is open and he has a strange expression (likely trying to focus on the camera). In the other, he is actually smiling and posing. Brightness/crop can be adjusted if needed.Tags: TwinkleUndoReverted