17:4617:46, 23 February 2021diffhist−2
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Equal Protection Clause
→Ratification: "Privileges or Immunities Clause" is part of the 14th Amendment. Was improperly linked and referred to in the text as the "Privileges and Immunities Clause" which is the Article IV, Section 2, Clause 1 of the U.S. Constitution.
13:4113:41, 28 April 2020diffhist−6
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Attila
→Historiography and source: removed 'today' from 'but today ...' as both jarring and unnecessary. Though one could use 'as of today' or 'to date', neither imparts additional information given 'not yet been found' later in the sentence.
05:3305:33, 28 April 2020diffhist−5
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Mongol invasions of Tibet
→1240: 'most possibly smaller' is not grammatically correct. While the author's intent might have been 'most probably smaller', 'possibly smaller' would seem to cover either case well enough.
17:4617:46, 23 February 2021diffhist−2
m
Equal Protection Clause
→Ratification: "Privileges or Immunities Clause" is part of the 14th Amendment. Was improperly linked and referred to in the text as the "Privileges and Immunities Clause" which is the Article IV, Section 2, Clause 1 of the U.S. Constitution.
13:4113:41, 28 April 2020diffhist−6
m
Attila
→Historiography and source: removed 'today' from 'but today ...' as both jarring and unnecessary. Though one could use 'as of today' or 'to date', neither imparts additional information given 'not yet been found' later in the sentence.
05:3305:33, 28 April 2020diffhist−5
m
Mongol invasions of Tibet
→1240: 'most possibly smaller' is not grammatically correct. While the author's intent might have been 'most probably smaller', 'possibly smaller' would seem to cover either case well enough.