04:3804:38, 25 February 2016diffhist−152
The Strokes
Reorganized introduction for clarity, style, and readability. Overall, this article is very poorly written. I will keep working on it to give it a cohesive voice, while maintaining the integrity of the work done before me.Tag: Visual edit
04:2104:21, 25 February 2016diffhist−53
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Julian Castro
I reformulated the first sentence of the second introductory paragraph and removed the phrase "the nonpartisan position" of mayor because it is misleading. One becomes mayor by winning an election, which is a partisan affair.Tag: Visual edit
12:4512:45, 14 December 2015diffhist+376
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Nick Faldo
→Early years: Improved sentence economy. Reduced redundancy; restructured paragraph to highlight biographical details alongside basic (objective) introductory details. See my comment in Talk Page ~~~~Tag: Visual edit
04:3804:38, 25 February 2016diffhist−152
The Strokes
Reorganized introduction for clarity, style, and readability. Overall, this article is very poorly written. I will keep working on it to give it a cohesive voice, while maintaining the integrity of the work done before me.Tag: Visual edit
04:2104:21, 25 February 2016diffhist−53
m
Julian Castro
I reformulated the first sentence of the second introductory paragraph and removed the phrase "the nonpartisan position" of mayor because it is misleading. One becomes mayor by winning an election, which is a partisan affair.Tag: Visual edit
12:4512:45, 14 December 2015diffhist+376
m
Nick Faldo
→Early years: Improved sentence economy. Reduced redundancy; restructured paragraph to highlight biographical details alongside basic (objective) introductory details. See my comment in Talk Page ~~~~Tag: Visual edit