17:1117:11, 2 July 2017diffhist+12
Symphony No. 8 (Mahler)
→Structure and form: I am correcting text which implies a consensus or community of belief, when in fact the only citation is to one individual's tentative suggestion. Frankly, I'd leave the sentence out entirely, but that would be undemocratic.
09:2509:25, 14 July 2015diffhist+2
Conscription
→United Kingdom: The Military Service Act received the Royal Assent on 27 Jan. 1916. The eighteenth month of a war that lasted nearly 4.5 years is not "nearly halfway".
17:1117:11, 2 July 2017diffhist+12
Symphony No. 8 (Mahler)
→Structure and form: I am correcting text which implies a consensus or community of belief, when in fact the only citation is to one individual's tentative suggestion. Frankly, I'd leave the sentence out entirely, but that would be undemocratic.
09:2509:25, 14 July 2015diffhist+2
Conscription
→United Kingdom: The Military Service Act received the Royal Assent on 27 Jan. 1916. The eighteenth month of a war that lasted nearly 4.5 years is not "nearly halfway".