22:2822:28, 10 October 2018diffhist−798
People's Liberation Army
undisputed by all authorities that military budget second largest in world so just leaving that statement in lede, taking out parts in lede with criticism by US Defense Department, etc. about budget estimates as this is covered in section dedicated to military budget and is too detailed for lede
22:2522:25, 10 October 2018diffhist−741
People's Liberation Army
delete parts of the largest paragraph in the lede as I think it becomes very detailed and not fit for the lede which states the most fundamental info; sentence about organization into 5 theater commands saved and place in other part of lede
21:4721:47, 10 October 2018diffhist−66
People's Liberation Army
military spending as a percentage of gdp is 1.9% according to the widely cited Stockholm Institute which is linked as a reference; delete other article which is an opinion commentary that offers a contrarian view, which would be fitting as part of a discussion on estimates of the military budget
22:2822:28, 10 October 2018diffhist−798
People's Liberation Army
undisputed by all authorities that military budget second largest in world so just leaving that statement in lede, taking out parts in lede with criticism by US Defense Department, etc. about budget estimates as this is covered in section dedicated to military budget and is too detailed for lede
22:2522:25, 10 October 2018diffhist−741
People's Liberation Army
delete parts of the largest paragraph in the lede as I think it becomes very detailed and not fit for the lede which states the most fundamental info; sentence about organization into 5 theater commands saved and place in other part of lede
21:4721:47, 10 October 2018diffhist−66
People's Liberation Army
military spending as a percentage of gdp is 1.9% according to the widely cited Stockholm Institute which is linked as a reference; delete other article which is an opinion commentary that offers a contrarian view, which would be fitting as part of a discussion on estimates of the military budget