05:3405:34, 29 February 2024diffhist−1
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Sons of the American Revolution
The possessive pronoun does not take an apostrophe. I removed the apostrophe in the first paragraph so that "it's" now reads "its". Grammar and orthography require the change.
23 December 2023
06:0806:08, 23 December 2023diffhist+1
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Annette Schavan
Typographical error corrected: "Germany" not "German" in paragraph beginning "On the occasion of the sixtieth anniversary..."
05:2805:28, 17 November 2023diffhist−1
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Robert Mallet (writer)
The verb should be in the simple past form, "became", so as to be consistent with the verb forms in the rest of the sentence and the remainder of the paragraph.
07:5407:54, 29 May 2023diffhist−1
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Boğaziçi University
The verb "administrated" does not exist in ordinary English speech--the text should use the regular English verb "administered".
02:4102:41, 15 May 2023diffhist−4
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Recep Tayyip Erdoğan
grammar corrected: "would" not "shall" -- and "the" removed from Marmara University, consistent with established English style
19:5019:50, 18 November 2022diffhist−106
Monastery of John the Evangelist in Makarovka
Numerous errors of English grammar and style corrected. This article must have begun as a machine translation from a Russian original. The English could do with further editing, perhaps by another Wikipedia contributor.
26 September 2022
04:4004:40, 26 September 2022diffhist−80
The Educated Mind
Revisions to make the English more direct, to avoid redundancies, and to correct grammatical errors and elisions. The opening sentence of the section on "Cultural recapitulation theory" made no sense--objects of verbs and prepositions were misplaced or were entirely absent. The section on "Romantic understanding" is a little more understandable now, but needs more work. Perhaps the first author can repair these sections.
27 August 2022
02:4002:40, 27 August 2022diffhist−6
Physis (journal)
The word "every" is redundant and ungrammatical. I removed it. The meaning of the original sentence is unaffected by this edit.
03:2903:29, 17 June 2021diffhist−29
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Cognition
In section "Improving cognition" : agreements between subjects, verbs, and predicates are incorrect in two places--now repaired. Redundancies in "Improving Cognition" and in "Dietary supplements" have been repaired.
7 June 2021
22:0322:03, 7 June 2021diffhist0
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War of 1812
Replaced "underlaying" with "underlying" -- the intransitive form of the verb is required here -- correction made.
00:3100:31, 27 March 2021diffhist−5
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Hurston/Wright Legacy Award
Two small grammatical changes to make verbs agree with the number of subjects in the sentence (singular subject-->singular verb, plural subject-->plural verb)
07:0507:05, 24 January 2021diffhist+6
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Sutter's Mill
Grammar mistakes corrected: (i) diseases do not "break", rather they "break out"; (ii) if a thing is "unique" it cannot (logically speaking) come from "all over the world"--the writer must have intended "various cultures". There was and is no "world culture".
05:4005:40, 24 January 2021diffhist+1,112
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User:Montaigne1944
←Created page with 'A note about my approach to Wikipedia: Wikipedia entries are sometimes remarkably good--their grammar is correct, their consistency from section to section is...'current
07:1107:11, 6 November 2020diffhist−31
Wilhelm von Humboldt
Removed Alexander von Humboldt from list of surviving children of Wilhelm von Humboldt. Alexander was the BROTHER of Wilhelm, not the son.
05:3305:33, 24 December 2018diffhist−9
BBC Three
Removed the word "immoral" from the text, as it was and is not in the description of the purpose of BBC 3 broadcasting.
05:1805:18, 31 July 2017diffhist−2
Arpad Weixlgärtner
An obvious translation mistake: "Aktstudien" means "action studies" or, in this context, "studies of action" -- correction made.
05:3405:34, 29 February 2024diffhist−1
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Sons of the American Revolution
The possessive pronoun does not take an apostrophe. I removed the apostrophe in the first paragraph so that "it's" now reads "its". Grammar and orthography require the change.
23 December 2023
06:0806:08, 23 December 2023diffhist+1
m
Annette Schavan
Typographical error corrected: "Germany" not "German" in paragraph beginning "On the occasion of the sixtieth anniversary..."
05:2805:28, 17 November 2023diffhist−1
m
Robert Mallet (writer)
The verb should be in the simple past form, "became", so as to be consistent with the verb forms in the rest of the sentence and the remainder of the paragraph.
07:5407:54, 29 May 2023diffhist−1
m
Boğaziçi University
The verb "administrated" does not exist in ordinary English speech--the text should use the regular English verb "administered".
02:4102:41, 15 May 2023diffhist−4
m
Recep Tayyip Erdoğan
grammar corrected: "would" not "shall" -- and "the" removed from Marmara University, consistent with established English style
19:5019:50, 18 November 2022diffhist−106
Monastery of John the Evangelist in Makarovka
Numerous errors of English grammar and style corrected. This article must have begun as a machine translation from a Russian original. The English could do with further editing, perhaps by another Wikipedia contributor.
26 September 2022
04:4004:40, 26 September 2022diffhist−80
The Educated Mind
Revisions to make the English more direct, to avoid redundancies, and to correct grammatical errors and elisions. The opening sentence of the section on "Cultural recapitulation theory" made no sense--objects of verbs and prepositions were misplaced or were entirely absent. The section on "Romantic understanding" is a little more understandable now, but needs more work. Perhaps the first author can repair these sections.
27 August 2022
02:4002:40, 27 August 2022diffhist−6
Physis (journal)
The word "every" is redundant and ungrammatical. I removed it. The meaning of the original sentence is unaffected by this edit.
03:2903:29, 17 June 2021diffhist−29
m
Cognition
In section "Improving cognition" : agreements between subjects, verbs, and predicates are incorrect in two places--now repaired. Redundancies in "Improving Cognition" and in "Dietary supplements" have been repaired.
7 June 2021
22:0322:03, 7 June 2021diffhist0
m
War of 1812
Replaced "underlaying" with "underlying" -- the intransitive form of the verb is required here -- correction made.
00:3100:31, 27 March 2021diffhist−5
m
Hurston/Wright Legacy Award
Two small grammatical changes to make verbs agree with the number of subjects in the sentence (singular subject-->singular verb, plural subject-->plural verb)
07:0507:05, 24 January 2021diffhist+6
m
Sutter's Mill
Grammar mistakes corrected: (i) diseases do not "break", rather they "break out"; (ii) if a thing is "unique" it cannot (logically speaking) come from "all over the world"--the writer must have intended "various cultures". There was and is no "world culture".
05:4005:40, 24 January 2021diffhist+1,112
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User:Montaigne1944
←Created page with 'A note about my approach to Wikipedia: Wikipedia entries are sometimes remarkably good--their grammar is correct, their consistency from section to section is...'current
07:1107:11, 6 November 2020diffhist−31
Wilhelm von Humboldt
Removed Alexander von Humboldt from list of surviving children of Wilhelm von Humboldt. Alexander was the BROTHER of Wilhelm, not the son.
05:3305:33, 24 December 2018diffhist−9
BBC Three
Removed the word "immoral" from the text, as it was and is not in the description of the purpose of BBC 3 broadcasting.
05:1805:18, 31 July 2017diffhist−2
Arpad Weixlgärtner
An obvious translation mistake: "Aktstudien" means "action studies" or, in this context, "studies of action" -- correction made.