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User talk:Wikifixer339/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Inline citations/references have coding errors * Some references missing information. Review APA style and correct. * Word count is s...'current
19:5519:55, 16 April 2014diffhist+378
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User talk:Blargnaflargif/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * All information needs inline citations to source * Citations missing lots of information * Proofread for missing commas, spelling/typ...'
19:2919:29, 16 April 2014diffhist+421
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User talk:DaltonKeen/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Absolutely no quotes should be used. Paraphrase or summarize. * History of marine engineering section is overly focused on engines ra...'current
19:2419:24, 16 April 2014diffhist+323
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User talk:Mpoltorak/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Most peer review comments are spot-on * Fix image caption capitalization * Some paragraphs are long for reading online. Look for plac...'current
19:1419:14, 16 April 2014diffhist+284
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User talk:1e4cMET/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== As already noted, citations need fixing. Image caption could be a little more detailed. Longer paragraphs should be split into smaller...'current
18:2918:29, 16 April 2014diffhist+313
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User talk:Insanecommunist/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Address peer review comments * Sources should be called "References" not External Links * Inline coding missing: sources need to be c...'current
17:4317:43, 16 April 2014diffhist+322
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User talk:Benjamintsawyer/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Good revisions for time-neutral language. * Needs editing for comma splices. * Check where/were confusion. I marked two with italics...'current
17:2717:27, 16 April 2014diffhist+346
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User talk:Hcaoduc/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Very thorough summary. * Remove bold and italicized text - most bolded text does not need editing. * Wikipedia style has all text flu...'
23:3323:33, 15 April 2014diffhist+501
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User talk:Gcayanan/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Revise all sentences to remove first person ("we"). * Needs editing for spelling, clarity, and excessive wordiness. * Needs grounding...'current
23:2023:20, 15 April 2014diffhist+395
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User talk:Krundstedt/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Remove New/Existing labels * Review every sentence in future tense and revise to include events/data that have already occurred. May...'current
23:1023:10, 15 April 2014diffhist+352
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User talk:Bobthbob/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * References, in-line citations missing or have major omissions * Don't use other Wikipedia articles as source * Specifications work be...'current
23:0223:02, 15 April 2014diffhist+315
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User talk:Dkoga808/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== Break large paragraphs into several smaller ones for easier reading. Use coding to group multiple references to same source together (s...'
22:2722:27, 15 April 2014diffhist+353
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User talk:Gclay419/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== Eliminate quotes; paraphrase or summarize instead. Major problems with inline citation coding. Section on future plans needs dates or a...'current
22:2022:20, 15 April 2014diffhist+340
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User talk:Marinersubie/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== Note the many edits/revision suggestions in bold or parentheses from peer review. Missing internal links Major issues with inline citat...'
20:2020:20, 16 April 2014diffhist+453
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User talk:Wikifixer339/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Inline citations/references have coding errors * Some references missing information. Review APA style and correct. * Word count is s...'current
19:5519:55, 16 April 2014diffhist+378
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User talk:Blargnaflargif/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * All information needs inline citations to source * Citations missing lots of information * Proofread for missing commas, spelling/typ...'
19:2919:29, 16 April 2014diffhist+421
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User talk:DaltonKeen/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Absolutely no quotes should be used. Paraphrase or summarize. * History of marine engineering section is overly focused on engines ra...'current
19:2419:24, 16 April 2014diffhist+323
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User talk:Mpoltorak/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Most peer review comments are spot-on * Fix image caption capitalization * Some paragraphs are long for reading online. Look for plac...'current
19:1419:14, 16 April 2014diffhist+284
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User talk:1e4cMET/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== As already noted, citations need fixing. Image caption could be a little more detailed. Longer paragraphs should be split into smaller...'current
18:2918:29, 16 April 2014diffhist+313
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User talk:Insanecommunist/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Address peer review comments * Sources should be called "References" not External Links * Inline coding missing: sources need to be c...'current
17:4317:43, 16 April 2014diffhist+322
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User talk:Benjamintsawyer/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Good revisions for time-neutral language. * Needs editing for comma splices. * Check where/were confusion. I marked two with italics...'current
17:2717:27, 16 April 2014diffhist+346
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User talk:Hcaoduc/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Very thorough summary. * Remove bold and italicized text - most bolded text does not need editing. * Wikipedia style has all text flu...'
23:3323:33, 15 April 2014diffhist+501
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User talk:Gcayanan/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Revise all sentences to remove first person ("we"). * Needs editing for spelling, clarity, and excessive wordiness. * Needs grounding...'current
23:2023:20, 15 April 2014diffhist+395
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User talk:Krundstedt/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * Remove New/Existing labels * Review every sentence in future tense and revise to include events/data that have already occurred. May...'current
23:1023:10, 15 April 2014diffhist+352
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User talk:Bobthbob/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== * References, in-line citations missing or have major omissions * Don't use other Wikipedia articles as source * Specifications work be...'current
23:0223:02, 15 April 2014diffhist+315
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User talk:Dkoga808/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== Break large paragraphs into several smaller ones for easier reading. Use coding to group multiple references to same source together (s...'
22:2722:27, 15 April 2014diffhist+353
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User talk:Gclay419/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== Eliminate quotes; paraphrase or summarize instead. Major problems with inline citation coding. Section on future plans needs dates or a...'current
22:2022:20, 15 April 2014diffhist+340
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User talk:Marinersubie/sandbox
←Created page with '==Feedback on 2nd draft== Note the many edits/revision suggestions in bold or parentheses from peer review. Missing internal links Major issues with inline citat...'