05:3905:39, 9 April 2024diffhist+484
Washington Generals
→Beating the Harlem Globetrotters: Find archive.org links for paragraph 4 sources (the Augusta Chronicle source, reprinted on the now-defunct Red Klotz Sports Enterprises homepage, was cited when that paragraph was first introduced back in 2008, but was removed in the intervening time perhaps because the link went dead)current
13:0813:08, 5 February 2024diffhist+1,140
Donald Lu
Clarify summary in lead of the contents of the alleged Pakistani cable documenting the Lu/Majeed meeting
09:3209:32, 15 January 2024diffhist+800
Pantex
→Environmental concerns: Describe 2005 NIOSH study more precisely, add mention of Amarillo Globe-News article on health compensation claims, change section title to "Health and environmental concerns" in light of content
15 November 2023
07:0407:04, 15 November 2023diffhist+199
Madurai
→Economy: Correct caption identifying the type of facility that Honeywell Technology Solution Lab is w/ sourcing (it doesn't appear to be just software, more R&D)
17:5917:59, 27 October 2023diffhist−87
Rule of law
→In relation to economics: Remove passage claiming that the rule of law "primarily connotes 'protection of property rights'" as the cited source doesn't say that (nor would a single source support a broad claim like that anyway)
15:2115:21, 19 October 2023diffhist−2,257
Debt-trap diplomacy
Rewrite lead, as far as I think the current state of the article's body can reasonably support at present (see TP for extended discussion and my rationale in detail)
11:3511:35, 19 October 2023diffhist−1,713
Suckling pig
Remove "Controversy" section for lack of available relevant and reliable sources proving that a notable controversy exists (see TP discussion for more info)
08:4308:43, 15 October 2023diffhist+226
Debt-trap diplomacy
Move Sri Lankan material from →Origin and background: to →Sri Lanka: as Sri Lanka (though significant) is not the only focus of the controversy, neutralize tone as we can't take sides in wikivoice per NPOV, expand into an introductory paragraph for →Sri Lanka: as it makes good context, and remove redundant material which occurs again later in that section
05:3905:39, 9 April 2024diffhist+484
Washington Generals
→Beating the Harlem Globetrotters: Find archive.org links for paragraph 4 sources (the Augusta Chronicle source, reprinted on the now-defunct Red Klotz Sports Enterprises homepage, was cited when that paragraph was first introduced back in 2008, but was removed in the intervening time perhaps because the link went dead)current
13:0813:08, 5 February 2024diffhist+1,140
Donald Lu
Clarify summary in lead of the contents of the alleged Pakistani cable documenting the Lu/Majeed meeting
09:3209:32, 15 January 2024diffhist+800
Pantex
→Environmental concerns: Describe 2005 NIOSH study more precisely, add mention of Amarillo Globe-News article on health compensation claims, change section title to "Health and environmental concerns" in light of content
15 November 2023
07:0407:04, 15 November 2023diffhist+199
Madurai
→Economy: Correct caption identifying the type of facility that Honeywell Technology Solution Lab is w/ sourcing (it doesn't appear to be just software, more R&D)
17:5917:59, 27 October 2023diffhist−87
Rule of law
→In relation to economics: Remove passage claiming that the rule of law "primarily connotes 'protection of property rights'" as the cited source doesn't say that (nor would a single source support a broad claim like that anyway)
15:2115:21, 19 October 2023diffhist−2,257
Debt-trap diplomacy
Rewrite lead, as far as I think the current state of the article's body can reasonably support at present (see TP for extended discussion and my rationale in detail)
11:3511:35, 19 October 2023diffhist−1,713
Suckling pig
Remove "Controversy" section for lack of available relevant and reliable sources proving that a notable controversy exists (see TP discussion for more info)
08:4308:43, 15 October 2023diffhist+226
Debt-trap diplomacy
Move Sri Lankan material from →Origin and background: to →Sri Lanka: as Sri Lanka (though significant) is not the only focus of the controversy, neutralize tone as we can't take sides in wikivoice per NPOV, expand into an introductory paragraph for →Sri Lanka: as it makes good context, and remove redundant material which occurs again later in that section