15:4015:40, 30 May 2024diffhist−133
Concorde Agreement
Undid last - unreferenced. I know it's unreferenced in main body, but that's no reason to allow a second iteration. Also "seat" is not very common language (if/when you are adding this with a reference).currentTag: Undo
07:5207:52, 27 May 2024diffhist−675
Forestside Shopping Centre
Removing a lot of last two edits - the Belfast Telegraph article doesn't mention Forestside, being entirely focused on Odyssey. And the Belfast Live one talks about what locals are speculating - that's not reliable information. Please don't add references for the appearance of providing reliable sources when you are not doing so.current
10:4810:48, 20 May 2024diffhist−209
CAMM (missile family)
→British Army: Rmvd "In 2023, reports emerged suggesting that investment had begun towards acquiring additional launchers, a new medium range radar, as well as the potential procurement of CAMM-ER for Sky Sabre" because source is some random guy spouting theories on TwitterTag: Visual edit
10:0110:01, 14 May 2024diffhist−916
Northrop Grumman
Undid last. Written like a news article, not an encyclopedia article (e.g. "bears a striking resemblance to its oceanic namesake"). " is intended to revolutionize intelligence gathering methods with its silent and stealthy operations" and "a testament to the technical advancements in UUV technology" are POV - written like Wikipedia is astounded at Northrop's prowess! And the source doesn't say it's subject TO electromagnetic radiation.Tag: Undo
11:2111:21, 13 May 2024diffhist−213
Spin (propaganda)
→Examples of "spin doctors": "Campbell trusted various journalists such as Tony Bevins and Denis Murray, with whom he had a close relationship, to write stories about Blair in a positive light;" is wholly inappopriate without a reference. Don't know anything about the former, but Denis Murray was a major BBC correspondent who I don't feel it's fair to say but a positive spin on Blair-related eventscurrentTag: Visual edit
17:2917:29, 5 April 2024diffhist−85
CAMM (missile family)
→CAMM-MR (Medium-Range): Removed "The missile is expected to finish development around the mid-2030s." because the source is so vague (and self-published): "CAMM MR joint development with Poland targeting the middle 2030s" - that doesn't say finish development, that sounds like entering service. Either way, far too vague.Tags: Manual revertVisual edit
15:4015:40, 30 May 2024diffhist−133
Concorde Agreement
Undid last - unreferenced. I know it's unreferenced in main body, but that's no reason to allow a second iteration. Also "seat" is not very common language (if/when you are adding this with a reference).currentTag: Undo
07:5207:52, 27 May 2024diffhist−675
Forestside Shopping Centre
Removing a lot of last two edits - the Belfast Telegraph article doesn't mention Forestside, being entirely focused on Odyssey. And the Belfast Live one talks about what locals are speculating - that's not reliable information. Please don't add references for the appearance of providing reliable sources when you are not doing so.current
10:4810:48, 20 May 2024diffhist−209
CAMM (missile family)
→British Army: Rmvd "In 2023, reports emerged suggesting that investment had begun towards acquiring additional launchers, a new medium range radar, as well as the potential procurement of CAMM-ER for Sky Sabre" because source is some random guy spouting theories on TwitterTag: Visual edit
10:0110:01, 14 May 2024diffhist−916
Northrop Grumman
Undid last. Written like a news article, not an encyclopedia article (e.g. "bears a striking resemblance to its oceanic namesake"). " is intended to revolutionize intelligence gathering methods with its silent and stealthy operations" and "a testament to the technical advancements in UUV technology" are POV - written like Wikipedia is astounded at Northrop's prowess! And the source doesn't say it's subject TO electromagnetic radiation.Tag: Undo
11:2111:21, 13 May 2024diffhist−213
Spin (propaganda)
→Examples of "spin doctors": "Campbell trusted various journalists such as Tony Bevins and Denis Murray, with whom he had a close relationship, to write stories about Blair in a positive light;" is wholly inappopriate without a reference. Don't know anything about the former, but Denis Murray was a major BBC correspondent who I don't feel it's fair to say but a positive spin on Blair-related eventscurrentTag: Visual edit
17:2917:29, 5 April 2024diffhist−85
CAMM (missile family)
→CAMM-MR (Medium-Range): Removed "The missile is expected to finish development around the mid-2030s." because the source is so vague (and self-published): "CAMM MR joint development with Poland targeting the middle 2030s" - that doesn't say finish development, that sounds like entering service. Either way, far too vague.Tags: Manual revertVisual edit