12:5012:50, 18 April 2023diffhist−178
Paper clothing
→top: There isn't anything actually in the article that supports the claim that paper clothing existed in BCE, adjusting lede to reflect more accurately what is in text,
07:3607:36, 18 April 2023diffhist−64
Broadcloth
→Types of broadcloth: some other fixes to keep list consistent stylistically (date ranges were randomly bolded), removing last line as no reference given and not specifically broadcloth identified.
18:1018:10, 14 April 2023diffhist−114
Scottevest
→top: toning down conflict-of-interest edit made by the company's account, simplifying lede and making it a little more neutral.
23:0523:05, 13 April 2023diffhist−197
Paper clothing
→China: some more copy-editing, tightening up text and addressing repetiton of phrases. I will transfer the last sentence to the modern history section as it seems more apt there
14:0414:04, 13 April 2023diffhist−120
Paper clothing
→China: fixing citations, incorporating page references into main references. The main text has been left untouched, only the citations have been tidied up to improve readability.
00:4800:48, 9 April 2023diffhist+349
Crinoline
→Bibliography: adding archive link to Lucy Johnston articles as they stood at time of article being written, V&A website have changed things around since then so links redirect somewhere else
12:5012:50, 18 April 2023diffhist−178
Paper clothing
→top: There isn't anything actually in the article that supports the claim that paper clothing existed in BCE, adjusting lede to reflect more accurately what is in text,
07:3607:36, 18 April 2023diffhist−64
Broadcloth
→Types of broadcloth: some other fixes to keep list consistent stylistically (date ranges were randomly bolded), removing last line as no reference given and not specifically broadcloth identified.
18:1018:10, 14 April 2023diffhist−114
Scottevest
→top: toning down conflict-of-interest edit made by the company's account, simplifying lede and making it a little more neutral.
23:0523:05, 13 April 2023diffhist−197
Paper clothing
→China: some more copy-editing, tightening up text and addressing repetiton of phrases. I will transfer the last sentence to the modern history section as it seems more apt there
14:0414:04, 13 April 2023diffhist−120
Paper clothing
→China: fixing citations, incorporating page references into main references. The main text has been left untouched, only the citations have been tidied up to improve readability.
00:4800:48, 9 April 2023diffhist+349
Crinoline
→Bibliography: adding archive link to Lucy Johnston articles as they stood at time of article being written, V&A website have changed things around since then so links redirect somewhere else