08:2908:29, 1 February 2020diffhist−23
French Revolution
→Constitutional crisis: "a large angry crowd of Parisians and soliders," and "insurgents and popular militias," are the same thing stated twice, so redudent. Insurgents and popular militias is more specific, so eliminated the former in favor of the later description. ~~~~
04:2004:20, 1 February 2020diffhist−1
m
French Revolution
→Constitutional crisis: "All of Paris," is considerably inaccurate; there were more than a few royalists living in Paris at the time. Also the statement "from all over France," implies, whether intentional or not, that people from outside Paris came specifically to particiapte in the attack of August 10. This was not the case. Perhaps it could be worded better. ~~~~
08:2908:29, 1 February 2020diffhist−23
French Revolution
→Constitutional crisis: "a large angry crowd of Parisians and soliders," and "insurgents and popular militias," are the same thing stated twice, so redudent. Insurgents and popular militias is more specific, so eliminated the former in favor of the later description. ~~~~
04:2004:20, 1 February 2020diffhist−1
m
French Revolution
→Constitutional crisis: "All of Paris," is considerably inaccurate; there were more than a few royalists living in Paris at the time. Also the statement "from all over France," implies, whether intentional or not, that people from outside Paris came specifically to particiapte in the attack of August 10. This was not the case. Perhaps it could be worded better. ~~~~