01:0101:01, 7 August 2011diffhist−192
Apollo program
Tighten up the lede, copyediting to improve readability. In particular, made the opening sentence stand on its own as a clear summary. Also reworked timeline issue in line with talk page.
11:2911:29, 27 April 2010diffhist0
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Apollo program
Tiny edit - move "first" into the wiki linked "humans" pointing to list of apollo astronauts (so it's "first humans" that's linked).
06:5606:56, 10 April 2010diffhist−31
m
IPad
→Hardware: The plastic might or might not improve cellular reception, but no references exist to say one way or the other.
01:0101:01, 7 August 2011diffhist−192
Apollo program
Tighten up the lede, copyediting to improve readability. In particular, made the opening sentence stand on its own as a clear summary. Also reworked timeline issue in line with talk page.
11:2911:29, 27 April 2010diffhist0
m
Apollo program
Tiny edit - move "first" into the wiki linked "humans" pointing to list of apollo astronauts (so it's "first humans" that's linked).
06:5606:56, 10 April 2010diffhist−31
m
IPad
→Hardware: The plastic might or might not improve cellular reception, but no references exist to say one way or the other.