20:5720:57, 13 August 2019diffhist+61
Corpsing
→Examples: tone; and explain what the incident was, it's useless to just say "the incident" and somehow expect people to know what it was
20:5520:55, 24 April 2019diffhist+74
Mount Katmai
→Geology: "VEI" needs defining, and what the term means needs explaining; "non-welded to agglutinated air fall" is not encyclopaedic language, rewrote in normal English
20:5720:57, 13 August 2019diffhist+61
Corpsing
→Examples: tone; and explain what the incident was, it's useless to just say "the incident" and somehow expect people to know what it was
20:5520:55, 24 April 2019diffhist+74
Mount Katmai
→Geology: "VEI" needs defining, and what the term means needs explaining; "non-welded to agglutinated air fall" is not encyclopaedic language, rewrote in normal English