14:4714:47, 9 February 2021diffhist−283
Jerome family
→Fourth generation: deleting Wiley Cooper-Jones. He was an infant whose biological parents are NOT related to the Jeromes. While he was adopted by a biological Jerome, he died of SIDS very shortly after birth.
19:5519:55, 13 May 2019diffhist−11
m
Al Stewart
→1990s: He didn't 'part ways' (which would allude to leaving), his partner 'died' - a big difference. Changed to 'losing'
20:5620:56, 26 April 2019diffhist−1
m
The Doobie Brothers
Fixing grammatical tense. If the Band is an "Are" (... a band...) then they can't be an "It" (...has been active...). Either Is/It or Are/They.
14:4714:47, 9 February 2021diffhist−283
Jerome family
→Fourth generation: deleting Wiley Cooper-Jones. He was an infant whose biological parents are NOT related to the Jeromes. While he was adopted by a biological Jerome, he died of SIDS very shortly after birth.
19:5519:55, 13 May 2019diffhist−11
m
Al Stewart
→1990s: He didn't 'part ways' (which would allude to leaving), his partner 'died' - a big difference. Changed to 'losing'
20:5620:56, 26 April 2019diffhist−1
m
The Doobie Brothers
Fixing grammatical tense. If the Band is an "Are" (... a band...) then they can't be an "It" (...has been active...). Either Is/It or Are/They.