02:4202:42, 19 July 2011diffhist−316
Diana Nyad
since that fact is mentioned later in the intro in a broader context, the extra mention disrupts the flow of the intro
02:4202:42, 19 July 2011diffhist−316
Diana Nyad
since that fact is mentioned later in the intro in a broader context, the extra mention disrupts the flow of the intro