06:1206:12, 18 July 2024diffhist−250
Twin Peaks season 3
copyedited lead section to remove
cruft-y character details and simplify and neutralize; moved claim about "sparking discussion" to body, where it is more
due; attributed said discussion since there's only one article about itcurrent
12:3312:33, 15 July 2024diffhist+34
Sean Penn
better sources needed for birth name and date; neither of these sources is high-quality; Volpi Cups also not noteworthy for lede; changed headings to generalize and lessen Americentrismcurrent
12:2712:27, 15 July 2024diffhist−1,694
Sean Penn
copyedits; marriages and Cannes Award are not due for the lede; removed undue Piers Morgan interview; if it was noteworthy, sources would have documented it, and we would have other refs than the interview itself; removed "language" parameter from English refs;
script-assisted date audit and style fixes per
MOS:NUM, unpiped links using
script
21:0421:04, 12 July 2024diffhist+484
Lorde
clarified accolades in lead; "Golden Globe" → "Golden Globe Award" for formality; added archive link; updated urls and status
06:1206:12, 18 July 2024diffhist−250
Twin Peaks season 3
copyedited lead section to remove
cruft-y character details and simplify and neutralize; moved claim about "sparking discussion" to body, where it is more
due; attributed said discussion since there's only one article about itcurrent
12:3312:33, 15 July 2024diffhist+34
Sean Penn
better sources needed for birth name and date; neither of these sources is high-quality; Volpi Cups also not noteworthy for lede; changed headings to generalize and lessen Americentrismcurrent
12:2712:27, 15 July 2024diffhist−1,694
Sean Penn
copyedits; marriages and Cannes Award are not due for the lede; removed undue Piers Morgan interview; if it was noteworthy, sources would have documented it, and we would have other refs than the interview itself; removed "language" parameter from English refs;
script-assisted date audit and style fixes per
MOS:NUM, unpiped links using
script
21:0421:04, 12 July 2024diffhist+484
Lorde
clarified accolades in lead; "Golden Globe" → "Golden Globe Award" for formality; added archive link; updated urls and status