19:2419:24, 20 August 2018diffhist−55
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Hillsdale College
edited first paragraph to remove awkward "it was founded in affiliation with the Baptist church" since that is clearly stated in the next paragraph. There is no such thing as "THE Baptist church" per standard baptist ecclesiology (emphasis mine), and it's redundant.
1 January 2018
19:0819:08, 1 January 2018diffhist−620
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Believer's baptism
made last two sentences of introduction more detailed as they were too broad brushed. Removed snake handlers paragraph since it was extraneous and irrelevant to the topic and clearly biased.
18:4218:42, 4 October 2013diffhist−49
m
Chop block (gridiron football)
Removed "Chop blocks are banned because they are dangerous." It's opinion and also plain awkward. Moved second half of two sentence paragraph to end of first paragraph.
20:2120:21, 8 June 2013diffhist+85
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Interstate 2
Added Donna, Weslaco, and La Feria to the cities it will pass through. Especially Weslaco as it is the commerce hub of the section between McAllen and Harlingen.
19:1119:11, 28 October 2012diffhist−718
Albert Haynesworth
Removed "However, with the Redskins, Haynesworth's performance was poor,[3] so poor that he was not only regarded as the worst free agent signing in the history of the Redskins franchise,[4] but also one of the worst free-agent signings in NFL history.[5]
19:3219:32, 28 June 2012diffhist−187
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Eric Hyman
Removed "He will leave USC in July 2012 to become the new Athletic Director at Texas A&M University, where he will lead the Aggies to national championships in football, basketball, and baseball." as it shows bias and, at this time, is speculative.
19:2419:24, 20 August 2018diffhist−55
m
Hillsdale College
edited first paragraph to remove awkward "it was founded in affiliation with the Baptist church" since that is clearly stated in the next paragraph. There is no such thing as "THE Baptist church" per standard baptist ecclesiology (emphasis mine), and it's redundant.
1 January 2018
19:0819:08, 1 January 2018diffhist−620
m
Believer's baptism
made last two sentences of introduction more detailed as they were too broad brushed. Removed snake handlers paragraph since it was extraneous and irrelevant to the topic and clearly biased.
18:4218:42, 4 October 2013diffhist−49
m
Chop block (gridiron football)
Removed "Chop blocks are banned because they are dangerous." It's opinion and also plain awkward. Moved second half of two sentence paragraph to end of first paragraph.
20:2120:21, 8 June 2013diffhist+85
m
Interstate 2
Added Donna, Weslaco, and La Feria to the cities it will pass through. Especially Weslaco as it is the commerce hub of the section between McAllen and Harlingen.
19:1119:11, 28 October 2012diffhist−718
Albert Haynesworth
Removed "However, with the Redskins, Haynesworth's performance was poor,[3] so poor that he was not only regarded as the worst free agent signing in the history of the Redskins franchise,[4] but also one of the worst free-agent signings in NFL history.[5]
19:3219:32, 28 June 2012diffhist−187
m
Eric Hyman
Removed "He will leave USC in July 2012 to become the new Athletic Director at Texas A&M University, where he will lead the Aggies to national championships in football, basketball, and baseball." as it shows bias and, at this time, is speculative.